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@kathleenramm

Looks like you just fixed it! Thanks!

@everyone

General Conference Oct 2023! Streaming sessions Sat 30 through Oct 1s!

h ttps://www.churchofjesuschrist.org/media/broadcasts/watch-sunday-live-sessions-including-music-amp-the-spoken-word?lang=eng (delete the space after the h)

The first session for today starts in half an hour now at 10:30 CDT! Come see this incredible men and women…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Kathleen! Your not dead! You’ve left everyone hanging for months now😂

Anyways, have you noticed that the formatting in general has been off? It’s been like that for well over a month now.

Hope to see you around again!

@rainmaker
Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m hybridlore, or just Hybrid, a homeschooled sophomore in high school, violinist, and writer. I also write ya/mg science fiction and dystopian!

What is your cyberpunk dystopian about? It sounds really interesting!

I skimmed your responses to everyone else’s questions, and I also really like the Lunar…[Read more]

@jonas

Sounds good to me! So is one absolute restriction is that the mass remains constant over the whole body? What if you could pull mass from objects you touch? There would have to be a limit on this, because you could just pull mass from the ground almost indefinitely for practical purposes, which would both shadow the original idea too much…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hi again! I’m pretty sure I’ve already introduced myself, and I’m late XD

I love the Wingfeather Saga, but I haven’t read anything else by Andrew Peterson yet .. I’m excited to, though! I’m waiting on Adorning the Dark, I think. And I also really liked Our of the Silent Planet!

I’m not on YWW, but I know that @kyronthearcanin is!…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I had a teacher who used to pretend he was a cat…. Sometimes I questioned his sanity lol. I think he should’ve been teaching kindergarten instead of high school.

@anyone

Is it just me, or did everyone’s profile pictures completely disappear?

@rainmaker

Welcome! I’m Janessa, aka Trailblazer, and I write mostly contemporary/historical fiction, but I’ve also done a little in the realm of mystery, and I’ve explored journalism as well. Like you, I’m not much into sports, but I love hiking (and I will use any excuse to get to the mountains lol). I was homeschooled most of my life, but…[Read more]

@rainmaker

Thanks! I appreciate it! And that sounds really cool. I haven’t thought of an idea that’s stuck yet but I think it would be fun to write about another universe or space.

Yeah, it’s a universe where the planets are actually 4d superstructures passing through a 3d cross-section, allowing for essentially unlimited worldbuilding pos…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I have a cousin that’s older than me, and he once read my work and said “I bet I could write a book, it can’t be that hard!” I was appalled. How dare he, haha. We started working together on a dystopia. We got 7 pages in, and he told me that he found it boring and had better things to do! Easy, huh?

You really have to stick w…

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@jonas

Interesting. Yeah, for my sisters thing, it’s a particular character that has the ability, where they are making use of pulling particle mass from higher dimensional space (she has me come up with the explanations by the way😂), so it’s also slightly different where it doesn’t have to be a constant universal mass. So the implant thing is a…[Read more]

@thearcanceaxiom

That’s very true! It’s a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, taking in a lot of different ideas from pros, plot, character, and bringing those different ideas into something cohesive is a challenge, but it’s worth it in the end!

I have a cousin that’s older than me, and he once read my work and said “I bet I could write…[Read more]

@jonas

Yep! That’s the way of things. Good luck with it! There’s probably many countless aspects to explore in it that neither she or I have thought of, or anyone else.

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, I never knew how hard writing can be! It’s a rollercoaster…sometimes you get depressed because you can’t figure out one sentence and then you get excited because you wrote something “good”. Writing is hard….but it’s a good challenge!

That’s very true! It’s a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, taking in a l…[Read more]

@jonas

That’s a cool concept! Although my sister has been playing with basically the exact same idea, although it’s more unique to bone mass then body mass as a whole, but the end effect would be similar.

@jonas

Oh. I guess I missed that. I really need to read more carefully lol!

No worries!

@thearcaneaxiom

On them having previous dealings, that can actually work, but the readers haven’t seen those previous dealings, so you need to show that somewhere. We’ve seen the Pythonos on many other occasions, but not in any that make it so that they are that much of an immediate threat when your on the run like that. I still think the odor is…

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@savannah_grace2009

I love that explanation, lol.

Okay, I’ll work on it! This critique has been so helpful! And no, it doesn’t feel too harsh. Thank you for being honest about what I need to fix. Also, I know I need to make this clearer (I don’t explain it in the story at all, just my thought process when I wrote this) but Sef and Lilitu had p…

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@jonas

Well, Sef wasn’t at her house when Neveah and Hanna were kidnapped. They were leaving the slums, and were walking down the path. It was a whole “group” thing, if that makes sense.

Sef saw them being taken when she was on her way back from the well.