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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Nahim’s never had a pillow fight! That would be fun!!!
Uh, yes, they will be staying the night.
A girl’s room and a boy’s room, both across the hall from each other. They will be high-ceilinged like most main rooms in this palace (for the sake of Snake) and bunk beds would be fine.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Salads
Little dainties
Some meats (though not many)
Elaborate table decorations made of food (cuz who doesn’t like creativity with food???)
Bread would be braided and put in the center
Soups, sure
Little platters of dips and snacks
Okay, I’m blank. I rarely ever actually describe food.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Goodnight!
I think it would be good for him to talk to Kari, Amir, and Hedieh, and find out how they might be able to help (whether that’s just brain power or otherwise). Maybe they’ll just be along to dissolve fights lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
This is a new scene I’m adding in here!
One summer day, Etta, Oscar, and Mattie had to stay home from school to help out on the farm, so George and I walked to school alone. I didn’t like it when Etta had to stay home; the empty seat beside me felt like a hole that would suck me in. The morning dragged by s…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Fennin will talk to his guests tomorrow, Nahim will calm down and maybe actually eat, and the Queen will possibly return. (I will also reveal her name and possibly the king’s) 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Leon and Zahlin both had their swords drawn. Nahim and the newcomer were both pointing guns at people. Just when Ellis thought the situation couldn’t get worse…
Well, Ellis, look at it this way. If Nahim’s future adopted son, Alpha Grath, had been there instead of Nahim, and his real father had showed up, there would be a full out duel t…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@smiley @grcr @freedomwriter76
I mean, I could literally have someone knock a candle over if you want…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
No, Nahim, Hugo and her are standing in a corner somewhere.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
We shall see, Sara hasn’t replied yet. Poor Ottoline!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
“Want me to feed you, Leon?” Flaz laughed.
Me: *slaps hand over face and laughs quietly* This guy is crazy! He’s so annoying, but so funny that you like him anyways!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Well, at least Leon is happy!
That reminds me, I should probably get Nahim to calm down and eat himself. Though, he’ll probably put that off until last minute or never do it, cuz he knows his eyes will get noticed. Not that he doesn’t mind getting stared at usually, just that when you’re eating…
Unfortunately, I can’t make him relax until Alec…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Zahiln, the reason you have no friends is because everything you say sounds like a threat 😂🤣🤣
XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
So the question arises, is my belovéd Nahim really human?
Partly.
So, he’s full Wondian, with human, which means he’s human but just from a completely different Galaxy far away from Earth.
He also has a dash of Wondian elf.
Concerning his eyes. They are unique to he and he alone (so far, though his adopted son and some of his…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
…Cotton candy herb which grows in depths of the caves of…
Caramel Caverns. The Caverns have an inherent connection to the headaches caused by Hypnotography because…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@everyone.
Note: All Latin endings are in nomitive singular of their declensions (If you understand Latin grammar talk!)
Forest/jungle – silva/for jungle: “render by phrase describing vegetation e.g. loca virgultis obsita (plur.)”
cavern – caverna at least I think so. My book only has ‘cave’ and that is the first listing. The other ones are
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Smiley replied to the topic My Fanfics in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 11 months ago
Marvel/Star-Wars crossover
Chapter 1
“Talk,” Wanda ordered as the man entered the room.
“I’m shocked Grievous, when did you start letting the apprentices do the talking?” Pierce snickered. He walked over to Wanda, smiling.
He might have been a bounty hunter, but the force had always been of interest to him.
Pietro walked in…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hold on I’ve gotta go get my dictionary…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Fennin is shocked right now!
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 11 months ago
@felicity @booksbyjayna @starshiness @livingwoodchronicles @landric
Hi! I haven’t seen you guys active lately, how are you doing?🤗 If your busy, I totally understand, but I just thought I’d say hi!😊 - Load More

@acancello
Hi!!! Oof yes I know I haven’t been active since the spring I think (?). But I’m doing really good! Thanks for asking! That means a lot. <3 I had a job over the summer and joined the Young Writer's Workshop as well so that has kept me busy. I'm also doing NaNoWriMo this month which is pretty exciting. I'm working on a newer writing…[Read more]
Hi! Oooh! A dystopian/thriller? That’s the exact genre I’m doing, (Mine takes place when an EMP happens and all the power goes out forever, and the government may be involved with the mysterious disappearances of people). I’m not doing NaNoWriMo, still working on my WIP, nearly 40k!!!
I’ve been pretty good, not doing to much besides school and…[Read more]
Oh that sounds really cool! And wow, that’s a lot of words. Good job!
Glad to hear it! I hope driving goes well for you. Are you excited or scared?
@felicity
Thanks! I’m super excited to drive, it will be so fun to go places by myself. Paying for the car and insurance though…lol!I have been practicing a bit, I just have to take the classes and things like that. I was supposed to in Aug/Sept, but nothing worked out. Hopefully sometime this year!
Oof yeah payments *insert mad face* 😉
I get that. It took me a year and a half to get mine because of…certain things…(me failing a couple times lol). But I’m sure you’ll do great!
@freedomwriter76
Hi! I was just wondering how publishing/editing your book is going? That must be so exciting!!
Wow! Your getting close! I hope to someday be there also, if all goes well I may be there next year 😂 Good job! And if you want to, keep me posted on how its going, I would love a copy when it’s published💗
Thank you, that means a lot 😊
How long have you had the idea/been writing your book?
@freedomwriter76
Riker was the villain??? Thats what I love about the drafts, you can change as much as you want 😂 I’ve also been writing since 2022, but a ton has happened in that year so I didnt get to much time in. I hope to finish my rough draft this year, then the editing starts🙄 🤣
Tysm!!!
@freedomwriter76
I have happened upon this conversation and thought you might find it interesting that Amazon has a service where you upload your book, and they print it. So… you never actually have the copies (a downside or upside, depending on how you look at it)
Totally understand if that’s not your thing or you don’t want to support amazon…[Read more]
@acancello
Oh my gosh girl I just read your profile and Walk Two Moons is one of my favorite books too! I didn’t realize anyone else read that!!!!
I love Walk two moon!!! Basically everything by Sharron Creech, have you read Absolutely normal chaos? Or Chasing Redbird?
No, Walk Two Moons is the only Sharon Creech book I’ve read.
You should definitely try them! Absolutely normal chaos is basically like Walk two moons, the narrator is Mary Lou Finney and it is just hilarious.
Chasing Redbird is much more sad, but its still a good read 🙂
Okay, I’ll look for them!
Have you ever read the Lions of Little Rock by Kristen Levine?
@felicity
Thank you! I hope to do well also 😂
@savannah_grace2009
No, I haven’t but I just checked it out online and it seems like a good book, I’ll have to check it out!
@acancello
You should! It is SO GOOD, one of my favorites!
@acancello So sorry, just now saw this…eight months later. As you can probably figure out, no, I haven’t been very active here lately—busy with editing and book launch plans. But I hope everyone’s projects here are going great!