Brianne

Wait, how did Nahim sleep through the palace almost burning down????!?!?!

@jonas

Nahim could wake up in the middle of it, with a headache, and no weapon.

He’s gonna flip out. lol.

@rae

We are all mentally insane. Haven’t you discovered that yet? lol

@highscribeofaetherium

But if they do it while the fire is still going, it means more danger and more chaos.

He’s got a point.

@jonas

Not without my charrie!!!!! Are you nutz!!!

Angry Fennin

@everyone

Uh oh. Jonas has an idea. RUN FOR THE HILLS!

Fennin

“I want everyone in the men’s quarters for a talk, now!” Fennin ran his fingers through his silky hair. His mother was no longer in the room, and Nora was gone too. Didn’t matter, Nora couldn’t have started the fire anyways. “Who started that fire?! I demand to know.”

@jonas

Yeah, this one was averted far too easily.

What else can we do to cause chaos? (Maybe the villains attack and Marcurious shapeshifts into something really terrifying_)

@rae @highscribeofaetherium

I love our “#MakeNahimTakeABreak” squad lol

I’m just waiting for another catastrophe.

I feel bad…you guys went and started a fire while my charrie couldn’t be there!

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry I haven’t gotten back to this. This seems fine. There isn’t much to say that I can tell, maybe you can show her coming up with different names, show the list itself. Have her second guess some parts, then change others. Just the show not tell type of thing is all that comes to my mind right now.

Tren continued

The entire hall of Lillenings scurried to follow Tren to put it out. Some left, turning to go down stairs, others grabbed anything on hand to grab water.

They were on the scene of the fire within minutes. Tren barked orders out as they used the water to hold back the flames. Fennin ushered the guests away back to their rooms, to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Fair enough, sounds good to me!

@esther-c

I could totally see myself doing that XD I just make up names on the spot sometimes.

@thearcaneaxiom

No problem, thanks for your input! I think I’m just going to try to make up something else to power them. I don’t want to go too far into all the science behind it, but I just wanted something to explain how the spaceships worked. It’s kind of just one of those things you have to brainstorm a bit for, so I’ll do that eventually.

@jonas

Oh. Yeah. Good point.

@rae

What did the Queen get herself into when she called everyone??? I think it made things worse for her XD

@rae

oh great. more chaos XD