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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
Good section!!!
Again, you’re summing up lots of time here, especially at the end. I would maybe like to be shown instead of told some of that, but it’s okay if you just really need to get to the next part.
Joseph felt that for once they were safe.
Then, something happened that changed everything.
Oh no… 😥
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)
275 words
“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.
Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”
N…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
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Esther replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 1 week, 2 days ago
So, whenever I’m overwhelmed, whether by emotions or circumstances, or just whatever, I have to remind myself that God is there and He cares and wants me to turn to Him for help. I understand it’s not easy for everyone to talk to a God that they can’t physically see or hear, but He’s there, Kefa. He wants you to come to Him wit…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Aww!! 🥰
So, one question—why would Amelia inherit part of her uncle’s inn? Wouldn’t that usually go to her brothers?
Also, I like that we’re getting more conversations between Joseph and Amelia. However, I feel like they’re all based on future situations—mostly just “what if this happens?” Except for this one:
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RAE replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 1 week, 2 days ago
Hey.
Just wanted to pop in to let you know I’m still praying for you Kefa.
May God be with you.
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
now I need to writer something for Nahim…
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
She was being chased through the meadow by a teen girl. Sorry if that wasn’t clear.
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Baron scene!
Baron watched a little girl run across a meadow, flowers woven into her long silver hair. She was laughing in childish joy as a teen girl chased after her through the meadow grass. As he watched, a breeze welled around him, playing in his hair. He was like her Guardian Angel, her hero, who watched from afar…
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
lol, that is the best reason I think I’ve ever heard!
That is such an un-cool reason to hit someone.
No! it’s great, I love it!
I’m so proud of my tag!
I know what I want!!!! I want more Baron.
Or Nahim.
Okay…I guess I can do that
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Esther replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 1 week, 2 days ago
Could I suggest something to you that always helps me when I’m feeling overwhelmed?
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
No worries! This week got really busy and I got sick halfway through, so I probably wouldn’t have been able to RP very soon afterwards anyway. Where should we start Lukas and Livia? I have no idea what day it is in relation to the dance (which has been planned for like forever now…it’s craaazzzyyyy 😂)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Alright!! 👍
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@liberty Hey, you’ve got to write the next scene! 😆
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Lol
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Why did you two target me? Is there something you want? like, something specific for me to write about or were you like “I’m gonna hit RAE!”
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
The birds tittered, the squirrels chattered, the wolves celebrated, the bears were content as the news spread across the forest: the one they loved had come to live in the forest. The Shapeshifter. His soft tread could be heard as he traveled beneath the boughs of the evergreens. He could be seen, in the form of a black wolf,…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@liberty X4 💨❄
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Looks good!
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@esther-c @rae @ellette-giselle
OMCCCC
I’m so sorryyyy I totally forgot about this!
Ahhh
Ruth, you can totally RP first!!
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