Brianne

@savannah_grace2009

Glace

Glace walked over to Fracture casually, before grabbing his throat and picking him up off the floor, and slammed him to the wall.

“You can answer my questions, now.”

@rae

Fracture

He scoffed indignantly. “If you don’t know what a chicken is,” Fracture giggled a little. How silly! And they called him a man-child when this man didn’t even know what a chicken was! “Then I think you don’t deserve to know.”

@acancello We should transition to riding the elk, as much as I want to keep doing our Hottoline scenes…

Ottoline

She approached the large elk, with a sense of awe. This animal was huge…it could trample her in a moment…but it didn’t. It just stood there, eyeing her curiously. She reached out to touch it’s soft muzzle, and it’s warm breath…[Read more]

@rae

Unless your new-to-riding charries go galloping or jumping

Well, you don’t really jump in a Western saddle, but we can for this RP if you want. XD

@keilah-h

Personally I’d rather be planning a story than scrolling through tiktok though lol

Yeah, same. I don’t even have tiktok, My phone’s too dumb to comprehend it. (I have a flip phone…)

@whalekeeper

Thank you! That’s something that sounds neat to try. I’ll work on it!

@acancello

It does help…thanks girl! <3

@savannah_grace2009

Glace

“I’m not calling you confusing…” Glace stopped. Fracture was very confusing. “Who’s Beethoven? Who or what is a chicken?” He pressed his questions.

@hybridlore

I used to use word, but when i switched to public school, our chromebooks didn’t have Word, so I had to use Google Docs. I then became used to Google Docs and honestly prefer that to Word, because if you forget to push “save” on Word, all your work is gone and you can never get it back. Also, I like the heading feature on Google Docs,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

And the “Ottoline Walton” line was SOOO something Marcurious would say…you nailed it!

Thank you!!

@rae

Putting last names together! XD, my big brother did that when he found out who my crush was!This scene is sooooooooo sweet!

Thank you! My little brother does that to me also, lol XD

@savannah_grace2009

Everyone above gave such great advice that I dont really have much to add. I sometimes worry about things too, that my book is to dark and I worry that my style changes throughout the WIP. I also doubt myself, but I realized that I shouldn’t be, you are the only one who can tell the story you are telling. It may be hard to…[Read more]

@acancello

Putting last names together! XD, my big brother did that when he found out who my crush was!

This scene is sooooooooo sweet!

Fracture

“How DARE YOU CALL ME CONFUSING!!!” he balled up his fists.

@acancello

Aww it’s so sweet! I LOVE IT!

And the “Ottoline Walton” line was SOOO something Marcurious would say…you nailed it!

@beth-torres

Did you try to post a pic?

Let’s get movin again.

@savannah_grace2009 @anyone who wants their charrie to answer this.

Glace

“Who’s Beethoven? What are chickens? This is a really confusing joke.”

Why did I tag myself? Ruee, how many braincells do you have? One?

@rae @calyhuge @beth-torres

We can still continue the scene with Tren, Carrie, and the Cat, I just wanted everyone else to have something to RP instead of just empty stuff while we’re doing this. Also, the Styx episode can continue.

@keilah-h

He couldn’t look at them. The big animals were making his mouth water, and he was sure no one would like it if their mount was eaten.

Lol! I was laughing so hard when I read this!