Brianne

@ellette-giselle

I’m obviously not a guy, but my advice would be to find a happy medium between those two extremes. (Unless he actually would be on one end of the spectrum). Try to think of him as simply a character. Keep in mind that he’s a guy, but don’t get so caught up in that that you give him a reaction that isn’t consistent with his per…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

This is a great topic! Maybe instead of just focusing on gender differences, it should extend to different personalities too? I for one would be interested to hear other people’s descriptions of how they process things and react to circumstances (and how it relates to their personality) even if they’re also…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Sara told me to just rp for her if I needed to. Whether you tag her or not I don’t think will change anything.

Jep

A smile played once again on her lips as she watched Slick and the rest separate Chase and his hoodie.

Our work here is done,” Slick grinned. “Milady? He’s all yours.” He and the other two stepped aside. So polite.<…[Read more]

@keilah-h

and whatever Silvanis was.

XD

@theshadow @theduckatator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronile22

Silvanis

“The only question is why, though, and how.”

“Honestly, I’d almost say my mother and sisters, if you weren’t involved.” Silvanis casually crossed his arms again. “Don’t get me wrong, she isn’t some kind of sorcerous villain like my…[Read more]

@rae

I would encourage you to play around with it and see what you like. This is a first or second draft, so I wouldn’t worry too much about the POVs being in the right place.

But yeah, I really like what Calyhuge suggested. Sometimes you just have to write and figure it out as well. Definitely write from both POVs in this part of the draft, t…[Read more]

@theshadow

You tagged me, but this never came up in my email, so sorry for the late response😕

I’m pretty much on the same vain as Whale. Rivals is a pretty general term, but usually you’ll see some parallels between them.

There can be the kind of rival where they are simply trying to one up each other, simply prove that they are superior in…[Read more]

@rae

I second @ellette-giselle, but I would probably make the larger portion of it Mandin’s, and then a shorter scene/s from Nahim’s point of view. Being inside the mind of a character who’s depressed and delirious can be disorienting (wow, alliteration there lol.) Except if the rest of the book is from Nahim’s POV–then, it might be better just…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I guess so.

Probably should put some tags on this:

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @calyhuge @linus-smallprint @theducktator @esther-c @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @idk

@keilah-h

also who’s Ru? A real person you’re working with, or your internal muse (like, say, the narrating character) or something?
Or yourself? lol

Actually, all three. Each in a way.

She’s a real person I’m working with in that we are alter egos of each other. Other I’s. In that same way, she is myself. She is also a sort of narrating cha…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Not to be to pushy, but are you ready to rp, or are you not inspired?

@keilah-h

also that’s an awesome name for the Skwadron. Any in universe reason why the word is spelled with  “SK” instead of “QU” or was it just for fun?

There is no q in the Realn alphabet. Therefore, there is no ‘q is always followed by u’ rule. To recreate this specific sound, they use the runes for k and w together. From Realn to English, W…[Read more]

@keilah-h

boomerangs?

Mandin and Nahim’s Space Skwad Skwadron.

also how come you use 21:00? You’re not in the US? (You don’t have to say specifically where you’re from.)

Actually, I’ve never left the US before. I just started using 24-hour time because it’s more practical. Still trying to make it like second-nature though.

@theducktator

Mandin isn’t most the time, except playful punches that feel more like a tap than a punch. The thing is, the Boomerangs were messing around in my head, having some fun and Nahim got hurt. Mandin is considered very strong even for a Realn, so he tries to be careful and not hurt people, but he used a little too much strength and…[Read more]