Brianne

@esther-c @rae @ellette-giselle

OMCCCC

I’m so sorryyyy I totally forgot about this!

Ahhh

Ruth, you can totally RP first!!

@ellette-giselle

I don’t think I ever really did that either . . . unless it was like, a cut on my finger. I’ve never really heard of people licking their knees 😶

@ellette-giselle

Lol, the last part. 😆

I think the scene felt a little awkward just because we haven’t seen much of Amelia and what she feels about Joseph, but I think you’re working on adding in more of that. Otherwise, good job.

@freed_and_redeemed I love that scene!!

@whalekeeper @loopylin I mean sure, you can team up, as long as it doesn’t get out of hand. *hides behind a tree*

@freed_and_redeemed

here’s 133 words

Three booming rifle shots shattered the sky. Jep shrieked. She slowly backed away from Chase, blood issuing from her body and head. She watched someone Chase couldn’t see with fear, slowly backing away and fleeing. Chase’s consciousness was fleeing, but he saw Roger, leaning over him. His blue eyes sof…

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@freed_and_redeemed

I’ll play. But I better be on whichever team Leon isn’t.”

Lol.

And another hundred words for me… I guess I’ll write you a Chase Duke scene

@raxforge

“What are you doing here? How did you find my home?” Max’s usually merry, kind grey eyes flickered with such a fire of fierce protection for his family that Baron shuddered under his gaze.

“I-I didn’t come to fight or kill.”

Max was slightly taken aback by Baron’s voice. Last time they had met it was a constant monotone, now it was qu…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Awww 😢😢

@liberty

I’m moving the conversation to this topic so we’re not just chatting in the middle of the snowball fight (it’s easier to get hit that way, you know! Lol).

YES!!! It’s so amazing to see God working in people. What are some key things you’ve learned from the experience?

Oh man! There is so much! One thing I’ve been thinking about a lot…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw, cute scene between Joseph and Julian! I noticed a few typos, but that’s not a big deal. Only other thing is, I noticed that in Sabina’s letter someone said that the orphans need Jesus. I don’t know why, I can’t remember too many references to Him, so that stood out to me since many fantasy books use a different name for Jes…[Read more]

@raxforge @loopylin @jonas

Baron (Brutus) and Jenna—Elderstrand, Rooftop Team

Brutus caught sight of the girl, and the wind that whipped about him grew stronger. He helped Jenna the last bit to the rooftop, before acting. There was a blur as he rushed down to the guards, punching one in the chin, and kicking the other in the stomach.

I’ll…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks again for the quotes! I didn’t want too many, so I put two more.

@raxforge @jonas @loopylin

Baron (Brutus) and Jenna—With Fel’s merry rooftop-leaping band

Brutus did not appear to like Ben’s question. Jenny answered it before he could.

“No, Brutus is just a guy I give hand outs too every once in a while, when he shows up. We don’t know each other that well.”

@esther-c The cover!!! 🤩🤩

@freed_and_redeemed Aw, Hans and Felix 😭

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Lol. Sometimes it’s hard to make connections, it took me a while to realize you guys were sisters too. Power is also your brother, right? Who is the oldest?

We’re not the only KeePers with twin siblings.

Wait—who ELSE? 😳

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

That is so cool!! 😅 Lol. Oops. You guys weren’t very subtle, though, both commenting on that. XD

@ellette-giselle I agree with Linus on that too. Show some more Joseph and Amelia scenes!!

@rae

Oooh, yesss, I love it!! 😍

@the_lost_journal

Hiiiii!

So basically you just compile a bunch of photos and quotes that describe your character. Everyone does it differently and there’s no right or wrong way to do it!

I’d suggest creating a Canva account (go to canva.com and sign up, it’s free!) and you can do really cool things with Canva, though there are other platforms…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hah! @linus-smallprint and I called it!! 😆

So, good section. The end… I know you said there are going to be parts of the books where you include longer scripture passages. That’s fine, but this scene kind of feels almost exactly like Aaron’s did, when he was studying the Bible about a husband and wife. I think it’s too similar…[Read more]