Brianne

@ellette-giselle

That scene was so funny, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha.

Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁

@theshadow

Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.

When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

True.

Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.

@theducktator

Oh I forgot I posted that lol

you’re fine!

@theshadow

oh my goodness

girl

that was literally amazing

I’m like speechless

@esther-c

I have no idea lol

ummmmmm where was the last time we RP’d???

@theshadow

Well, people who choose to live apart from God on earth are kind of living a personal hell, right?

Right, it’s self-inflicted. It’s choosing to be something lesser than you could be, which leads to sorrow.

How can someone get to the point where having the ultimate good would be worse for them than hell?

Because of who they chose to be.…[Read more]

@theshadow

That is true, he did have that point in between after the betrayal and before his death to repent. I guess we’ll never really know for sure why God allows us to go to hell. After all, as Judith said in her book, not even humans can a know for sure what is on other humans hearts, let alone the God of the Universes’ mind. Maybe people tha…

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*saves snowballs*

Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley

To everyone who threw snow at me:

I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….

I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!

I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

WHAT

GIRL

Your writing is so good!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!

@elishavet-pidyon

No. XD (Although that would be pretty funny if we didn’t know until now, LOL). I had just recently learned that y’all were related and guessing from the gibberish and the “PWR” at the end of the post, I figured it was Power. 😉😂

@elishavet-pidyon

🫢🫣😂

@elishavet-pidyon

😱 Did your brother get into your account?!?!

🤣

@theducktator

Yeah, ok. Six MCs really isn’t terrible. I always find them interesting when they’re done well. (Not that I’ve specifically read any that didn’t do it well, buuut…. XD)

@the_lost-journal

oh yeah, your stalking us… thats nice 😊

👀😈😇

@the_lost-journal

Hope your break is restful and profitable for you! Merry Christmas!!