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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@everyone
Sixth Chapter!!!
Chapter 6
A Voice
Lir stretched out as far as the eye could see-the crown jewel of Andromeda, the pride of the Pythonos.
Sef stood on the hilltop, overlooking the city, taking in the sights and smells as if she were starving, though she knew she’d never be able to partake in the beauty of it all.
Paynes w…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
I honestly don’t know XD
Here’s the link you can use (but there’s not a lot of “new chapters”…and the first couple “new” chapters need a lot of redoing, but you can read ahead if you want! Just keep in mind that if you critique them, I’ve seen a lot of the problems already. The new chapters I’m talking about are…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
I just found THE BEST Christian singer ever…her name’s Hannah Barr! Pleeaaasssseee look her up!
My favorites are: Miss Independence, P31, I Am, The Search, You Were There. But I really love ALL her songs, she’s amazing! <3 -
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That reminds me @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h
Are you guys still in this rp, or have you decided to drop out?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Why is it every time I read one of your rps I laugh so hard that I start crying?
Also, i know some kids in class tripped my poor Chase twice, but I don’t think we’ve officially added any bullies. Though the math teacher…does she count?
Um, me, Whaley, Loopy’s taking a break, Esther, Sara, Freedom is currently not in any rps, Keilah…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
“Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”
“Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”
“Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”
Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!
Totally can see someone saying…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I’m good with it if Sara is!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Love the boards!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Like literally, Hallie looks so pretty and Easton is practically perfect!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Ahhh!!! They look so good!! 😍 Thank you thank you thank you!!! 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
So I really want to keep reading your story, and I need to double check—are the chapters you’re sharing on here in the Reedsy link you shared with me? Or is the link an older draft?
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I would love to see them!!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………
He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
Decided I was going to take a break from KP yesterday, because the plot of my WIP needed fixing and stuff but I think I fixed it so, I’ll be around until next time I get upset about how awful my writing is.
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You’re writing’s NOT awful! I’ve always admired you and your style and passion for it!
And don’t put pressure on yourself to be perfect.
Also remember your identity is in Christ, and He gives you the gift of writing! When I get stuck, I pray about it, and then the words and plot just come to me.
But girl I know how rough it is…you get…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
Bye
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I figured out my problem, so I’m going to be still here. I know I was only gone 15 hours but I needed the mindset I guess to actually get stuff done.
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WHAT YOU WERE GOING TO LEAVE?!?! huh girl whattttt?
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Temporarily, not like forever. I just had a bit of a realization that my WIP makes no sense, and I got really stressed out. So, I was going to take a break for like a month or so, but then I got over it. It was nothing
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Ohhh haha
It’s okay cuz my WIP doesn’t make any sense either…I’ve been there and I know how stressful that is XD XD-
DON’T SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@anyone else who’s read Nahim is bad at guns
I take it back!
So, I was doing some research stuff this afternoon, ya know, adding more suspicious stuff to my search history, and finally looked up how to correctly write a sword fight, cuz I’ve been avoiding those since I’m really bad at fight scenes. During my quest for…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009
Writing sprints are really fun! So are crawls… which is something similar, but it’s longer and more involved. I’ve been doing some of those over at the King’s Daughters’ Writing Camp. (Which y’all should check out! It’s awesome!!)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Lukas
“Woah,” he breathed, watching Liv’s complete control over the water. “Cool.” He half-smiled.
I’m kinda stuck now, lol. We can keep their conversation going or end it here if you want. Or maybe we can have them meet up with some other peeps.
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I am now a fan 😆
REALLY?!?!
YESSSSSS LET’S GO!!!!
What are your favorites???
Hmm… *contemplates for way too long*
P31, I Am, Calling, You Were There, and Like Me, I think.
Those are all sooooo good!!!!!!!!
Have you heard Wait For You, or HQME, or LOML? Elias is soooo sad it almost made me cry!!!!
Haha I was just about to say that I forgot about HQME. LOML is also really good.
I know! That one was really sad 🥺
Haha! I love how she has so many different styles, like rap (sort of), upbeat, worship, country/Christian, and also really sad songs to cry to XD