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Oh gotcha!! 😆 Yeah a little but maybe I could figure it out! I’ll definitely post if it works 😂

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Okayy its up to you!! 🤣

You can go ahead if you want 🙂

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Anika

“Before the hike, we could tour the hotel,” Logan said.

“Sure.” Anika gestured to Freya. “You’re coming, right?”

(We could have Freya stay back because solfyre’s gone . . . but Idk if that will be weird for Falon and Logan lol. Maybe we should just wait? Up to you)

@smiley Cool! I like how it’s the shape of something to do with the character.

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I might be gone for a little bit so you can skip over me if you have to. 😉

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A little bit of backstory, jsyk…

My brother (he’s a couple years younger than me), whenever he puts in Klayden, is probably going to keep his original powers from the book because it won’t make too much difference. Basically he can breathe underwater, and he’s a great swimmer. In the book, they all get their powers from…[Read more]

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Probably! 😂

Anika

“But I’m sure Klayden will want to swim once he’s here.”

Anika nodded. “Hiking sounds fun too.”

(Umm I don’t really know what to do next 😅 @smiley You want to bring Falon in? or we could do something else, idk, feels like we’re kind of just stalling here XD)

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(I’m going to go with it was Anika who suggested to swim? I mean, Freya probably wouldn’t either lol…)

Freya

“Uh, yeah, that could be fun, or we could hike through the woods,” Logan said.

Freya nodded quickly, a little embarrased. She was the only Coryi she’d ever met who couldn’t stand water. “Yes! I mean, woods.…[Read more]

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Anika

“This is so beautiful!” Freya gasped, running her hand over the bedspread.

Anika set her bag on one of the beds and crossed the room to the window. She could see the beach and the huge courtyard.

(I thought a beach would maybe be fun? Idk you can ignore me making up stuff 😅 I think I also said it was in a forest…[Read more]

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Are we taking turns or just going whenever?? 😅

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Awesome!!! Thanks 😉

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Awesome!! I can share it with you if you give me the username 🙂

And yeah, I’m in the car rn lol 😅

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Thanks!!!! 😁 I love bouncing ideas off people . . . anyway these sound great and I’ll definitely think about them!! 2 was kind of my idea in the beginning, but great minds think alike right?? 😆

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Freya

Freya stepped out into the hallway, and walked alongside Anika and Logan until they reached their room, 834. She opened the door and walked in, smiling. The room was extremely clean, and bright, and somehow warm at the same time. “This is so beautiful!”

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“I’m sixteen,” Logan said, which surprised Anika. He looked older.

The elevator opened and they stepped out onto the floor. Their room was down at the end of the hallway.

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Freya

“Sixteen, but I’ll be seventeen soon.” She pointed down to an impressive courtyard. “Do you think they’re employees or other guests?”

Freya followed her gaze and blinked. “I’m not sure. Klayden’s not down there.” She turned back to Logan. “I’ll be eighteen soon. What about you?”

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Anika

(Umm . . . I’ll say sixteen? I mean, they’re on a vacation by themselves . . . 😅)

“So how old are you guys?” Logan asked, watching the view from the glass elevator.

“Sixteen, but I’ll be seventeen soon.” Anika was stunned by how big the resort was. It seemed to take up the whole forest, with hundreds of windows…[Read more]

So I might start working on my WIP from a month or so ago again, and . . . I was wondering if anyone would have feedback or want to brainstorm with me?

Just wanted to mention after all your responses on my help forum earlier and reading a character arcs book this morning, I’m feeling inspired xD so please excuse my rambling 🤣🤣

Here’s the…[Read more]

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I think it’s . . . your turn? If you wanna go 😉

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Ah, gotcha 😅 Yeah me either!