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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
XDXD
Yeah I just have KP lol
Yep, Sorren’s great! I’d say I like Dune and Sorren in different ways, is the hard part, so I could never really decide.
Trust me, young Podo is great. And yeah, 100 Cupboards was really good, but if you ever read it, be prepared because a lot of names are really similar. The author made it that way on…[Read more]
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Kylie replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Thanks…that honestly really helped a lot!! I’m not a big sci-fi writer, more of an animal protagonist kinda gal, but I had the crazy idea that built itself in my head when I was in surgery(its a long story).
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ohhh that book would be hilarious . . . 🤣
Yeah, Ig that would make sense. I don’t have any socials but I use google a lot for writing stuff . . . more as procrastinating XD
Yess 😂 Oh my goodness – two sorren chapters!! (Y’know I can’t decide if he’s my favorite or if Dune is XD)
Oh lolol, young Podo would be so funny 🤣 I…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Hey! I don’t think we’ve met. I’m Solfyre. Love your profile pic btw, wolves are the best! 🙂
So, I don’t have a lot of information here, but for sci-fi as a whole, there are a few important things you have to think about. One, like in fantasy, is worldbuilding. It’s a huge aspect. In sci-fi, there are going to be different…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
You’re welcome! Maybe I should write a book on tips…
Tip 1, write cliffhangers for motivation…
Tip 2, in romance, no sap, just make people smile…
Lol okay I’m done XD
Yeah it is kind of weird, right? But I think it’s to help writers that maybe aren’t allowed on social media stuff at all, maybe. Idk.
Me too! So, Naria it is!…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
I did it again!!!!
My dad just walked by and made a comment about me smiling 🤣🤣🤣
Ahhh only writers will understand this. And people who reply to each other on forums XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ahaha! Maybe that’s the real trick of relationships in a story… Not exactly being all sappy, but making people smile. (lol perfectly worded I’m so trademarking that XDXD)
AHA!! *jots this down in a notepad* That’s a pro tip!! Now I finally know how to write relationships . . . lolol
But seriously, if I ever decide to add romanc…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore (thanks!) @livingwoodchronicles
I will get to this in a minute, sry I’m on the ride home. I’ll do my best to help lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I would love to help!!
I mean . . . I like sci fi 🤣 But I’m not an expert or anything. Still I could try to help you with whatever you need help with!
(Nice to meet you too, by the way!)That reminds me, @kyronthearcanin has a reallyyy good sci fi WIP. So maybe she would have advice?
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
GASP I love that so much!!! I like dystopian stories in general but that’s just awesome. I love the names too!
Yep, I’ve posted my WIP Healer. (I will keep my rant as short as possible XD) So, there are five races- the Lupinari (based off wolves), Arcanin (based off bears; they have magic, symbolized by the stars on their…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Just saw your response!! Lol is it just me whose screen doesn’t update until you’ve already replied?
Nice to meet you! I’m new, lol.
I really like that idea about Thorn . . . I’m talking like I’m her author XD. But yeah, @whalekeeper, I think that would be really cool! And now I want to read your book too, lol
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Kylie replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Heyyyyyy!!!!! I’m back!!! How’s it going, girlfriend!???
And I need a bit of help. Does anyone here know how to write really good sci-fi?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
So . . . I don’t really know much about your story . . . but I can give you my thoughts about character arcs!
I’m a complete beginner at writing this kind of thing, but I do read a lot. So maybe that counts for something? xD
Dogchild and Marcel both do sound very similar, but the way that they react is different. So in my opinion,…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Random thing, while I’m thinking about it…
For Healer, (and for the series I’m hoping to make out of it) I’m doing a POV from first-person present. It’s been different, because I usually write in past tense. I was trying to think of a way to add that style into this fantasy world.
So… My idea was, a story collection from this…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronethearcanin
Somehow I managed not to see this until now… I’ve done that twice in the past two days! 🤦♀️
XD
Doing well!
Glad to hear it!
What’s you WIP about? I feel like maybe I’ve heard of it (you might even have told me lol I have a terrible memory lol) but I’m drawing a blank…
Oh great question! I have multiple projects, but my main is…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ahaha! Maybe that’s the real trick of relationships in a story… Not exactly being all sappy, but making people smile. (lol perfectly worded I’m so trademarking that XDXD)
Yes! We are Hybridlore and Solfyre, the weird pantser duo! 🤣🤣 I might’ve mentioned this before but I love your username. Lol part of the reason I used Solfyre as…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh my goodness — I read that paragraph and by the end, I wAs SMilInG ToO!!!
We can be weird together 🤣🤣
She sounds perfect for him XD and I really want to see that drawing 🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ooooh I should draw them together XDXD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
XDXD
Right!? lol
Lol my brainstorming process is all over the place rn. She would be another soldier helping them in their mission to free the prisoners. I always call her Naria in my head, because I randomly thought of that name and wasn’t sure where to use it (I know it sounds like Narnia but whatever XD). I picture her with dark…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
oh yeah!! I’m probably doing it right now 🤣
because we can’t have everyone become halflings XD
Awww . . . why not?? Jk XD
Seriously though, that would be the best !! I can picture it already . . . he’s so awkward 🤣🤣
So would she be like someone who helps them? Ahh I srsly need to know what happens now — all my br…[Read more]
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