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@acancello

This is a great idea! I love your description! 😃

I recently had to do a string-along story in school. Basically, the title is one word, then from there the sentences grow in length. I made it a short version of a WIP I worked on when I was in… third grade? 🤣

Anyway, here it is:

Wolf

Sirius ran. Over the hills. Past the rocky…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

They hold them to the side. My original thought was that it would be awkward- and would look strange- for them to hold it straight out. Not to get into too much detail but an enemy could just shove the handle down their throat… Yeah, so to the side. Besides, in most battles (there are few for the Felisaro anyway, as they don’t…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h

Wow! Thanks for the great advice! (And the more critiquing the better. it really does help)

To answer your question, yes, Quelin is definitely going to be a big part of the story. As for the whole thing about the thumbs, the Felisaro had to be extremely inventive to get past that. They basically started out with…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

And you’re so welcome!! They are so entertaining and I love reading them!! 😀

@freedomwriter76

Yes…

You heard me right. (Unfortunately 🙁)

I’ve been mapping out his character arc…and, well…

That’s the end of it. 

BUT!! He is redeemed before he dies. But yea…when I said before I don’t feel bad for him much…I do feel bad for him here. But Dylan…I feel SO bad for Dylan…

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@freedomwriter76

❤️❤️❤️ Thank you!! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 AW BREN 😭😭😭😭 And @freedomwriter76 I RARELY feel bad for him, honestly 😂. Even when speculating his death

Godly, you write Vance so well!! Like, that’s exactly what he would do, (unfortunately 😬). I really love reading y’all’s RPs!! They’re always so good 😀

@freedomwriter76

I can’t yet, about to wash some dishes 😅, but I’ll try to later! 😊

@freedomwriter76

I have no idea who anyyyy of those people are… XD but they look cool! I want that guys epic looking lego wings. Pls?

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, just wait!!!! ❤️ (lol, you would be correct! XD)

Ok good! They need love and truth!! 😊

Lol…oh no…😂 Poor Ev and Ami and everyone else!!!! 😅😥😯😟

Yeah… lol XD. This is the second draft and it’s ending up pretty different from the first draft. (Same plot points, different means of getting there, if that makes sense.) I really…[Read more]

@joy-calle

So, I don’t know what advice I’ll be able to offer, since I’m editing my first novel. XD (I know I’ve been writing for a couple of years, but I rarely ever finished writing a book. 😂)

Anyway, I’ll echo what some of the others have said. If you need to, take a break. For as long as you need. Sometimes, when I don’t write for a littl…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, that’s great! 😀 No one in my family loves history as much as me..😭 Except maybe for 1 of my aunts…she likes history. 🙂

At least you have a family member who does. 😊

Ah, wellllll….haven’t written much for them lately since I’m kinda out of ideas/motivation, but they’re doing…uhm…y…

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@joy-calle

😂 I love that ship name

Thanks! XD (That reminds me… I need to throw in another couple on this game show… 😏)

Ooh, that is so cool! I’ve done it for Eliza and Kimbel too, and Eliza is ISFJ-T while Kimbel is ISTJ-A. That’s why their relationship dynamic is so cute cause she’s veryyy emotional and he’s super logical but his softness fo…

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@freedomwriter76

Yesssss, history is so interesting!!!!! I’m so glad to hear I’m not the only one who loves History, lol, sometimes it seems as though I’m weird and the only one who does XDXDXD

😂 lol. You’re definitely not the only one. My dad and my brother also really like history so it’s fun to discuss it with them. 🙂

Speaking of World War…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

LITTLE ARA AND NOVEMBER ARE ADORABLE!!! 😍🥰

@sarafini

I’ve loved writing for as long as I can remember! 😀 I think I was 10 when I attempted to write a book. (It was bad… Like, the chapters were half a page long. XD) I started a lot of other projects. I always puzzled how an author could write such long books. 😂 Anyway, when I di…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Don’t mind me falling off the face of the planet for a little bit. 😜 (I had some stuff to do) Either way… I’m back! XD

Yeah…Ancient History is not my forte, but it’s not too bad, lol XD I really love seeing how a lot of Biblical prophecy (like the destruction of certain cities) has come true and is supported by archeolog…

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@freedomwriter76

idk…maybe!!! (lol, okay, you caught me. XD So maybe I WAS trying to make you laugh XDXD)

😊 Yeah, I had a slight suspicion… 😂😆

Thank you so much! I just couldn’t stop smiling after that.

Awwww, I’m so glad!!!!!!! ❤️💗❤️💗❤️💗❤️

Yes!!! Thanks to you, and all the rest of amazing people here on KP! Today’s a lot better already. I fee…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

“Stupid boy,” I muttered under my breath.

Bren had escaped.

But not for long. 

I rounded the corner, my fists clenched.

There was Bren…

But there were other people with him.

I heard Bren stutter “O-Oh! I-I-! Help-please!” He looked back at me, fearful.

He looked up at the stranger, finding the conf…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*Hugs poor baby*

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NOVEMBER YOU’RE WORTH SO MUCH MORE THAN THAT ;(