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@ellette-giselle

Yayyy!! They’re back! 🥰

This was a good section too.

The one that seems to be their leader is extremely bold, and he doesn’t seem to care what anyone says— or throws at him.”

Leon smirked, having a hard time stifling a laugh. He could guess who that was

Lol 🤣

Hi Julian, we’re back.”

This did seem a little out of place. I’m…[Read more]

Maybe she just has a very common face 🤷🏻‍♀️🤣

@whalekeeper

That’s so insane… 👀

Lately my book has been feeling more real to me, but that’s just because I’ve been fleshing things out more. i didn’t think my characters were ACTUALLY being brought to life. 😳😂

@ellette-giselle

I mean, if I bumped up the year the story takes place a decade or two, it would be even more realistic cuz then she’d be of marrying age!!! 😆

Oh no!! I have some characters from older WIPs that I would not like to meet 🫣😂

@ellette-giselle

No……

You’re joking….

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

😱 Ahhhh that’s crazy!!!! 🤯

@ellette-giselle
No way!!! That’s insane!!! 😱 Oh my goodness that’s so funny!! 😂😂 That’s so crazyyyy. Wait what did her husband fiance look like??

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka

Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh I get that 😂

Right now it’s a little easier “writing” since most of it is editing and moving scenes and such since this is a second draft, but *shrug* sometimes I just don’t have that inspiration, ya know?

Oh wait! You haven’t heard about this WIP yet!!

Ok I’m dropping the moodboards, hang tight.

@godlyfantasy12

She’s g o n e *cue dramatic spooky music*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just not forever 🤪 Or maybe she’s actually writing like I should be doing &#x1f…

@grcr

i’ve got your nose.

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THAT’s where it went 👀

OK I”M BACK

I was over here like, “I’m here!” And then I got called to dinner 😑😂

@koshka @esther-c

I gotta work out exactly how Erich got into the US Army tbh😂🫣 I’m thinking it could’ve been a part of the offer for giving him a shorter sentence or something, but I gotta put more research into it

 

Or he just joined the Army after he had his sentence.

 

idk exactly yet. 😅 if I have to change things a bit I…

@godlyfantasy12 I’m on nowwwww 🤭

I’d be open to creating our own community. Slack would probably work for me, I’d have to check with my parents about Discord since I don’t have it yet. There’s also Group Me… which I don’t know much about, but plenty of youth groups seem to use it for announcements (not sure if you can create mini channels or anything like that.)

@godlyfantasy12

I ammmm

but idk for how much longer, lol

@loopylin @keilah-h
I’ve never used Discord, but I’m open to it!! I wasn’t aware you could have separate channels and such.

Keilah, Slack is mostly used for businesses, but I’ve also been a part of a writing camp that uses it and it works pretty well. The only problem is that if we use the free version, the message history is only 90 days.

@ellette-giselle

Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.

@ellette-giselle

I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.

Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!