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@ellette-giselle

No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction together. That’s how I ended the last book. I can add some reminders though.

Ok, sounds good!

They actually left before that happened. (I said that in the last book) so they had no idea what even happened in the Cap…

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@ellette-giselle

I like it where it is as it is sort of the first rush of the downhill slide we’re about to hit.

Oh no.

@ellette-giselle

🤦🏼‍♀️

It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.

Do I really gotta remind the reader?

In the previous books in the series, the POV characters switched every time. Especially with the way that you left off the last boo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle hehe, ok then🤭

(not a finished scene btw, but a snippet)

The Schind family looked exhausted, barely awake.

Not that Leon doubted that he probably looked much the same.

Thoughts of Germany had reawakened thoughts, memories, and even nightmares that plagued his sleep and sometimes even his waking moments.

He shifted on the…

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@ellette-giselle hehe thank youuuu🤭

and no, this is actually a section from The Bois’ book🫶😂

(and I’ll fix those typos, this was completely unedited, so😂)

tho I could share a snippet from Book 3 if you wanted👀

@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk

I love them y’all😭🫶

So much had crumbled.

So many lives had been lost.

Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.

Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.

And Eze…

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@ellette-giselle haha I’m glad you like my commentary😂

@ellette-giselle You can tag me, sure! But I can’t make any promises on me reading all of the sections😅🫶

and that feeling definitely came across in the scene

@ellette-giselle I only read the section you shared today, I picked quite the section to read😭💀

Any thoughts on this section in particular?

Other than I think it shattered me??? 😭

it’s really good, I love the strength they all have for their faith and their determination to stand no matter the cost.

I think it’s sad enough and portrays…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I haven’t been keeping up with all of this, but MA’AM.

way to tear me into pieces on a random Friday morning😭😭

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I like it.

It was a little unclear that the other three men were joining Leon and Julian until now, unless they were in the first scene and I’m completely blaming. I just don’t think we got to hear that they were back yet.

My guess is that since no one has seen the prince’s face, they will replace him with his c…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Next two chapters!

@theshadow

No worries! That makes sense.

@the_lost-journal @anyone-else

What are your thoughts on Jesus having siblings?

The Bible says that He does, and I am going to believe it.

If you could visit one of the holy sights from around the world, where would you go? And why?

I’m not sure! I think it would be really cool, but honestly I’m content to just read about them. I’m not big on…[Read more]

@theduckator

oops

I totally disappeared again lol

sorry hahaha

Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/

Making money is AWESOME lolll

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good!

Oh, gotcha, thanks.

@ellette-giselle

I have hope that you won’t kill off all the characters… but am expecting at least one of the MCs to die. 😭😫

@ellette-giselle

Great first section! You did a good job of establishing the stakes and the characters’ situations. One thought I had (for you to consider) is possibly to remove the first journal entry and start off the book with Leon. It might be a stronger beginning… but it works great with the journal entry there too.

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@ellette-giselle

Oh, haha. XD. Yeah, I think we talked about it briefly right when you were first starting it.

Leon and Julian, from the last book. (Plus Albee and Ian, but I don’t think they’re coming back . . . unless they do. That would be cool.) I have a lot of other favorites, but they’re not in the Empire, so I doubt they’ll have much of a…[Read more]

@theshadow

The main character is incredibly bland, but also the most unique person in the universe. Typically I’ve noticed female protagonists are like this, and they’re usually super insecure about their looks but are actually pretty. Additionally, the protagonist has some special ability that makes them stand out and is caught up in a love tri…

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