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I’m here….I’ve been excited all day XD

@rae

Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol

Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?

@esther-c

I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉

I will check it out!! I need all the help I can get…. XD

@freedomwriter76

Girlllll I love your writing so much!! (it almost always makes me tear up but I love it!!!!!)

Does it seem boring?

NOOOO! Definitely not! I was so into it, and I could see everything in my mind!How is the pace?

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

A little, I can tell that Riker struggles with guilt and L…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…

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@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…

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Ack, Mom just said dinner when were ready so I might not be on at 5

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, we eat really early.😅

Were already so close!

Dis is gonna be a breeze 😎

@acancello

You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.

@jonas

Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…

@trailblazer

I love it sooooooo much!!! LIBBIE HURRY UP AND SAY YOU’LL MARRY HIM!!!! AHHHH!! lol!

#LALBERT

@mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, that’s something I easily forget about. Thanks for reminding me! I’ll definitely keep that in mind as I write and edit. 😊

@esther-c

Huh, I’ve never really thought of it that way before, but I think that’s the aspect of their relationship that I play off of in the second book to create more conflict. Man, I am going to be pondering over this all day. XD

XD glad I could make you think! It might be a good source of conflict for book 2, but I think it would be great if…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alrighty! Here we go!

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Um, I wouldn’t say it’s boring. I think the pacing is pretty good. Honestly, boring is so subjective, so no, it’s not boring. Because I don’t mind things moving a little slower at the beginning. Some people m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yep!

Awesome!

Ev is obviously pretty reckless. He doesn’t seem to care about getting into danger, and I’m not really sure to describe his personality but he seems playful?

And Ami is sweet and responsible. She really cares about Ev and wants to protect him.

I think you just nailed them both in a few sentences. XD That’s exactly what…[Read more]

@rae

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.

Alrighty, awesome! 👍

I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our…

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@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write…

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