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Ottoline

Her cheeks flushed red with embarrassment.  Ellis probably thought she was a wimp. She couldn’t even pick up a wooden sword for goodness sake! Yet she couldn’t slow her racing heart, she couldn’t control the torrent of memories, images, sensations that never ceased.

“I’m s-sorry,” she clasped her hands to try to hide their tr…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

She also has a gun. It probably does something cool but I don’t know yet,

haha lol

Hey, it’s me again, sprinting, lol. I’ll try to go to the top of the hour…if my attention span can last that long, lol

@rae

He’s one of my favorite characters. Lucky for Nahim, Marcurious is going to be fighting for the wrong side…the King’s side XD so hopefully no homicides (?)

@jonas

Ottoline

“Yeah, I’m f-f-f-fine,” she forced the words out between her quivering lip. Stop being a baby and pick up the sword!

She reached down again, and picked it up. She couldn’t do it. The blade, though it was only wooden, reminded her of too much. Too much. 

@jonas bye!

Marcurious

He’s 16, with laughing caramel brown eyes. He’s about 6′ tall and has black hair.

He’s kind of annoying, reckless, kind of views himself as invincible because he’s been able to save himself from danger before. He has shapeshifting powers. (should they be able to work here or not???) He’s a little entitled, because he’s a prince. He…[Read more]

@jonas

Oh sorry about the confusion! Do you want me to go again? Either way is fine XD

And yeah, I have to go to bed also at 9:00 here, 10:00 your time (you’re in Central time, right?)

@jonas

Oh, no, I’m not joking…XD

Okay, then, I’ll add him!

Also, are we going to continue the “conversation” between Ellis and Ottoline? I added another Ottoline POV. (If you don’t want to, that’s fine)

@grcr

I like it! IT’S SO SAD THOUGH!!!

poor Cannon…

@jonas

Can I add Marcurious? lol he’s not a villain…but he’s kind of annoying…

And then since Marcurious and Ottoline know each other, it will create DRAMA because they’re on different sides!!!

@euodia-vision

lol

@autumnlily

I am also naming the chapters of my WIP, I feel like it helps readers keep track of everything. It is a bit tricky to come up with a good name, I really like it when the name vaguely hints about what happens and one that dosent spoil anything. Theres a good in between, like you dont want to name one “This character died.” Instead, be…[Read more]

I tend to name chapters based on the lesson learned or progress to character arcs. For instance, instead of naming a chapter on the physical things that happened (visiting the bakery) I would rather name it based on the conversation the characters had at the bakery (Such as… “If you only understood”)

Hope that helps 🙂

@whalekeeper

That’s so cool! It obviously makes sense to happen, but it must be strange looking back and reading into yourself like that. In a good way, of course! 😂 So much to learn from.

yeah, really strange!

It’s also fun when your younger self surprises you with something really well written, or a good joke 😂 Because now that you’re in the f…

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@smiley

*dies*

both of these couples and amazing in different ways 😂

I’ll try to RP for my charries today 🙂

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

Yeah, I’m fine with that! It’d be helpful if you could write a RP for Clint tho, Freedom. 😅 Cuz I don’t know where to start with my characters. XD

@rae

I like it!