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Allison replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
I love it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
oooh, I like it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Livia
““Hey, um… it wasn’t your fault.” she felt a touch on her shoulder, and saw Lukas’s breathtaking smile, before managing a quick smile. To her surprise, she was able to keep the tears at bay long enough to push past Lukas and Xandro and walk off to find a bathroom. She couldn’t risk any waterfalls of emotions, not in front o…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Poem I Wrote ❤️ (Hey… got any ideas for a title?) in the forum Poetry 2 years, 9 months ago
Ooohh… I really like it!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Wow! That looks really good!
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
I guess I listened to the same song 96 times this year….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
“Hey, um… it wasn’t your fault.” He offered her a lopsided smile, quickly pulling his hand away and shoving it into his pocket.
Awwww <3
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Fynn
Fynn cocked his head as Chase pulled his hood down lower. Huh… so Chase wanted people to avoid him. Fynn could tell that this was more than a joke, or simply Chase having a bad day. This was something deeper than the surface. He wanted to ask, but he restrained himself. If Chase wanted to share anything, then he could share in his o…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Fynn
“Am I… is it rude to wear a hood while eating in public?”
Fynn shrugged. “I don’t know. If you want people to avoid you, then sure. If you want to look friendly and approachable, then… probably not.” He hoped he didn’t come across at too blunt or rude. He was just giving Chase the facts.
I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Thank you all for your replies!!
I think I’m leaning towards the taking the place of death more now. Thanks!!
And for those of you sobbing over Amir’s death….
Sorryyyyy 😭
It just has to happen. I know it’s gonna hurt writing it, but I also was planning Amir’s death from the very beginning…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Auuggh, that’s going to be so sad! XD But it sounds like a good ending for the story and the character arcs, it’s just… 😭
Anyway, I think if that’s what feels right to you… then do it. It will definitely be more powerful and emotional if Amir dies in Dabir’s place, but personally I feel like a government that would allow that is…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Me too!!! Abe is so sweet!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
He’s more concerned about being torn apart atm. lol! Though he’ll probably have one eventually.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Fracture
“I want answers! And I am going to get them if I have to tear each of you apart!”
“Well, that’s not very nice,” Fracture frowned.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww I love that scene so much!!!!!!! It was so sweet! Great job!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I did notice that. It always seemed kind of unnatural and kind of stilted to me. Would it make it better if I tied it into the fact that he’s an orphan? He kind of struggles with that, because he was abandoned and never knew his parents. He loves Azazel and Indie so so so much, but he feels like he’s not worthy to be treated…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOO! YOU CAN’T KILL AMIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs into my pillow for two hours*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *takes deep breath* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Anyway……
I do like the idea that he’s dying in place of Dabir. I think your idea that it could be part of the law that anyone can willingly take the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
probably shouldn’t have tagged whaley since she’s not active in this RP 😶🌫️😶🌫️ pls nobdy kill me
lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Fracture
He was minding his own business, trying to stay awake. He was tired. He needed a nap. His eyelids felt heavy…why couldn’t these people just stop talking, get along, and let him-
“What are you? What do you want?” Fracture screamed a high pitched yelp as a voice growled in his ears, and jumped six inches in the air.
“We’re being…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?” Lukas asked. He kicked himself. That came out sounding much worse than it sounded in his head. He wished he could take it back, but could do nothing. So he stood there with a pained expression, waiting for Liv’s reply.
I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Livia
“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?”
Liv stared blank…[Read more]
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which song XD
“Run” By one Republic. I cant believe I listened to it that many times… XDXDXD
Oh! I also forgot to tell you that on my Pintrest account, I have a whole section about Hugo under the board titled, “My Novel”
I saw that!! The quote about her being “ten feet below” was SOOO SAD!!!!!!!
Oh, and the reason I’m private is because apparently since I’m under 16 it has to be private. Maybe I’ll make a new account then? idk.
I know right?😭 I’m seriously having second thoughts about killing Vikii
That sounds awful…. But its true, lol!!
Idk…I feel like you could make your readers cry for Hugo if you killed her…and everyone loves crying over a good book…but keeping Vikki alive also might be fine too…it’s up to you!
Yes, yes, its so hard. I probably will write it tonight. I’m leaning towards yes😭 😭 😭 😭 Although I can see them being the cutest couple in the world. I even planned their entire future. They were going to get married and then have twin boys and eventually a girl and a boy and another boy, but I dont think that will be with Vikii. 😭 😭 😭…
Aww! 😭
Even though I think you said Hugo already has a wife in the future, sometime we should plan Hugo and Ottoline’s wedding since on KP it’s technically an alternate universe lol! (sorry, I’m obsessed)
Lol! Maybe! I may not have the time though, I am trying to completely edit and publish next year. Hopefully though! That would be adorable!
Yeah, I totally understand! I’m so happy for you that you’re so close to being done!!! But if you ever feel like taking a break from writing your WIP…well…just tag me XD