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@freedomwriter76

Oh ok, that does help. I thought he was literally the one who did it.

I think I remember esther from a snippet!

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok 😂😅 I actually wasn’t sure there for a sec XD

Yeah!

@freedomwriter76

I think it’s a great idea! I like it when I get to see a complicated characters pov. I think what would be important to me is to make to clear why he killed Fin, how he felt about it at the time, and how he feels about it now.

I think it’s much harder to redeem a character who has killed another character, however it’s important…[Read more]

@acancello

Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

That’s so good! I will try to add on more later if I have time!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks! 😁

@trailblazer

Okay, that’s probably better anyway haha! But the suspense is killing me! I love good romance, so right now for some reason I really want Libbie and Albert to become a “thing”. lol.

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralized writings (I think that’s everybody? Sorry if I missed anyone!) Okay I’m bored and I’m procrastinating getting ready for school (where I live it’s 6:30 am rn), so I’m just gonna roleplay. (sorry, @esther-c ,haha) Also, when you RP you can either do it in third person like I’m doing or in…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

OH MY GOSH CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!! I am so happy for you! You’ll have to tell me the name when you actually print it so I can read it, haha!

One of my goals is to publish my first book before I turn 16/before I graduate. (I’m really young for my grade, so I’ll be 16 my senior year and then in september I’ll turn 17 then graduate…[Read more]

@grcr

No clue 🤣

savannah_grace2009

@freedomwriter76

That so exciting!!! Good job!!!!!🎉 👏 🎉 💗

@trailblazer

Also, I have to know…is Libbie ever going to fall for Albert? It’s okay if you can’t say because of spoilers but I just wanted to know, haha.

@trailblazer

Got it! I’d just never heard it before, but it makes sense.

@sarafini

One thing I noticed was that it was really hard to tell that it was a dream. If you weren’t looking close enough, you would have missed it. So since it’s a dream, you might want to make it more obvious. But I liked your story! It was good!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like your idea of that the magic words are evil because of the purpose given by the Pythonos. So I might use that? I’m still not sure, haha!

Names of people:

Ottoline, Marcurious, Sparrow, Rishona, Berko, Sef, Lilitu, Azazel, Indie, Jordan (I need a new name for him, an evil one, so if you could help that would be great!),…[Read more]

@trailblazer

“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most

practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…

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@esther-c

I’m so excited, lol!

@freedomwriter76

YESs that’s AWESOME girl!!! I can’t wait to see it published someday… and of course read it XD

@trailblazer

Looks good! Didn’t really notice anything to fix.

@freedomwriter76

XD I didn’t mean to come off all ‘CuZ I’m An aDuLt Now’ 😂🤣 I’ve only had instagram for a year at this point, so ig I got it when I was nearing 17. My parents may have let me have it sooner, but I wouldn’t have wanted it then.

My sister, me, and about three of her writing friends from other countries follow each other, and it’s…[Read more]