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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Think of it like your giving your readers a plate with a cheeseburger, but when they reach out to grab it, you pull it away, and throw a burrito at them. Sure burrito’s are great, but the readers were excited for that cheeseburger, and maybe a burrito is better served pushed towards them on a plate, instead of thrown at their f…
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 11 months ago
Is anyone else already excited for Christmas?
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Haha! Really? I have friends who used to do that, I think it lasted for a couple of years, 😀 My brother is 13, and is the typical 13 year old (gross jokes and humor, things like that XD ) When he was 7 I think he was just obsessed with Legos, but I dont quite remember 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Got it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Haha! I’m glad! Hugo is so funny, (I based him off my brother so I have plenty of ideas, lol!)
Oh I bet!
My brother’s more annoying than funny. He’s 7 and likes to pretend he’s a cat and meow ALL THE TIME.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Sometimes I bring some taffy or chocolate to school and throw it into a crowd to see what happens.
Oh my gosh that’s hilarious
I should try that! Though my school doesn’t have “crowds”, we’re too small for that, lol. (There’s 120 kids in the whole school, K-12)
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
😂 And I guarantee you will watch it again!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi, nice to meet you!
We do have one role play going on that you can join (I know because I made it, lol) if you want. We’re pretty far along, but you can hop in anytime! It’s the one titled “Character Party” on the General Writing Discussions session. If you happen to join, you might want to read all the previous RP’s so you…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks! I also followed you 🙂 The one I did was private with a few pins, is that the right one?
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Allison replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi Divinity ! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. Oooh! A historical fantasy muder mystery sounds exciting! I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, no…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Girl I legit started laughing!!!
Haha! I’m glad! Hugo is so funny, (I based him off my brother so I have plenty of ideas, lol!)
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@ferwhen_grace
Oh, I just read that, a few things about me?? Hmmm..
I just moved cross country
I have 26 pets (One dog, two Guinea pigs, two parakeets, three ducks, five guinea hens and the rest chickens)
I have been home schooled since first grade.
I do blog, (heres the link if you want to check it out 🙂 ) acancello.blogspot.com
I lo…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@trailblazer @acancello @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @grcr @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
Her hands shook as she fingered the delicate blue fabric. This is for me? She wondered. What kind of person do they think I am? She could never wear that, she decided. This was too beautiful a dress for someone like her. She ran a hand through her tangled ha…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m good, thanks! How are you doing?
Hi! Of course you can be here, everyones welcome 🙂 lets see…. I dont really have the patience to look at moss, my mom and brother love to do it, but I cant really get into it. I do loooove to look at paintings though! I haven’t read any of those books you listed either, but I am…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh, sorry, it is chapter 6!
Well, two years have passed, and Sef has been abused, so that changes her personality a little bit. They both get older and more mature. What do you mean by different, like personality?
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@trailblazer @acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings
Amir
Amir quickly hopped up out of the pile of shoes, bouncing on one foot for a moment as he regained his balance. He pasted on a goofy grin. “I’m fine,” he said with a chortle.
Thankfully, nobody really cared or payed attention to him for very long. But i…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m ok! Thanks for asking! I was feeling really bad this past week, but much better and actually quite happy today. I can kinda feel fall in the air… and we have the heat turned on now 😍
I just re-watched captain America over discord with my sister who is at college, and that was really fun. It’s a pain to set up but once you do…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m putting more thought into the 4th chapter. Then I’m going to make it so Lilitu gets 2 chapters. What do you think of the revisal?
Chapter 4: A theif
“Git your grubby fingers off that bread!” Lilitu froze. He looked longingly at the loaf of bread which might as well have been a bar of gold, before turning to face the e…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Another Project I'm Working on in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Wow, how are you so good at creating magic systems? i’m so jealous, lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic Another Project I'm Working on in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I like the idea of the table with the powers intersecting!
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Um….YES!!!!!
Good, I’m glad I’m not the only one who is.🤣
Yep 😂
@acancello I’m going to try to write a little book and illustrate it for some of my friends for Christmas gifts. Do you ever make your own gifts that you give?
@janellebelovedpig
Yes, I love making home made presents, though I do sometimes buy them for certain people. Its so much fun to make gifts and if you wrote a book/illustrated it, I’m sure that they would love it!
@janellebelovedpig
Me: casually butts into the conversation
I’ve been into making fantasy maps lately. I paint the whole page with coffee to make it look brown and old, then I dump rice on the paper to generate the land form. Then I trace the rice with pencil or ink, add details, and then paint the water blue! It’s so much fun! I made one of those…[Read more]
@savannah_grace2009
That sounds awesome! Ooh, makes me want to try it!
It is soooo much fun!!! It takes a while, maybe a day or two, because coffee takes a while to dry, but it’s well worth it!
@savannah_grace2009 Does instant coffee work for that?
@janellebelovedpig Yeah that’s what I use XD