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@trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @grcr @freedomwriter76

Just for fun, I’m posting Ottoline’s mood board/aesthetic. Because why not, lol.

Do you guys have mood boards for any characters in this party? If so, feel free to post them. (Pics are FINALLY working again!!!)

@freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @keilah-h

Here’s another one, my new favorite that I did a couple weeks ago. Pics are finally working again!!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Oooh, I wasn’t, but it sounds really cool… I don’t know if I’ll have enough time, though. Maybe I’ll try to finish my novel by the end of that month?

What about you?

@smiley

This looks really cool! I’d be interested to read it if you ever post it! What do you mean by digital face claims?

@fernweh_grace

Yep, I’m on YDubs! Thanks for the tag @hybridlore 😁

Uh, let’s see. A little bit about me. I play guitar and sing for church, I’m about to be a PK, I just sort of finished a decent sized novel (no editing, so it’s kinda rough XD), and I’m working on a sequel. Hybridlore is kind of the beta reader for all that stuff (:

Aaaaanyway,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, I love it!! 🥹

@acancello

Actually, I think I need to send a different link in order for you to follow the right one… just figured out how to make it work for the account I use more often. Sorry about that!

https://pin.it/4BoUxPm this should be it…

@acancello

Yep! I followed you back since it said I wasn’t, XD

@rainmaker
Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m hybridlore, or just Hybrid, a homeschooled sophomore in high school, violinist, and writer. I also write ya/mg science fiction and dystopian!

What is your cyberpunk dystopian about? It sounds really interesting!

I skimmed your responses to everyone else’s questions, and I also really like the Lunar…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hi again! I’m pretty sure I’ve already introduced myself, and I’m late XD

I love the Wingfeather Saga, but I haven’t read anything else by Andrew Peterson yet .. I’m excited to, though! I’m waiting on Adorning the Dark, I think. And I also really liked Our of the Silent Planet!

I’m not on YWW, but I know that @kyronthearcanin is!…[Read more]

@thearcanceaxiom

That’s very true! It’s a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, taking in a lot of different ideas from pros, plot, character, and bringing those different ideas into something cohesive is a challenge, but it’s worth it in the end!

I have a cousin that’s older than me, and he once read my work and said “I bet I could write…[Read more]

@jonas

Oh. I guess I missed that. I really need to read more carefully lol!

No worries!

@thearcaneaxiom

On them having previous dealings, that can actually work, but the readers haven’t seen those previous dealings, so you need to show that somewhere. We’ve seen the Pythonos on many other occasions, but not in any that make it so that they are that much of an immediate threat when your on the run like that. I still think the odor is…

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@jonas

Well, Sef wasn’t at her house when Neveah and Hanna were kidnapped. They were leaving the slums, and were walking down the path. It was a whole “group” thing, if that makes sense.

Sef saw them being taken when she was on her way back from the well.

@jonas

Cassian is Lilitu’s older brother. (I’m pretty sure it’s in there somewhere? idk, now I’m second guessing myself, haha)

I don’t know, I probably should know, but I don’t know where Cassian is, lol. I guess he just wasn’t in the scene? He’s old enough to work, so probably doing that or stealing something to feed his family. Characters are…[Read more]

@rainmaker

Hi Divinity, I’m Sara 🙂 I’m a freshman in high school. You’re going to love KP!

I am working on my WIP, and am trying to fix some problems with it, but I am making some progress (I think???).

I have 2 horses, too many chickens (you can NEVER have too many chickens!!!!), 1 dog, 4 cats, and a herd of cows. We farm and ranch in…[Read more]

@jonas

One thing to consider might be to actually not show what happens to Neveah until later in the story, instead of following her. That way you could linearly follow Sef and Lillitu up through this chapter. Cutting to Neveah and Ottoline after Sef and Lillitu jump off the cliff could be a great way to add tension. Always cut when your audience…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Here’s Sef’s reaction:

Chapter 4: Stolen

***revisal, the new segment at the end****

“Hush,” Cassian squeezed her tighter. Sef sobbed into his shoulder.

“I hate you!” she yelled in his ear. At that moment, she really believed it.

“Yes, I know,” he smiled sadly, knowingly. Sef soon got tired of crying and struggling and so she…[Read more]