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@savannah_grace2009

Okay, here it is! I just used a placeholder for his faceclaim, so you’re welcome to change that! Let me know if you would prefer gray or any other changes 🙂

https://www.canva.com/design/DAF0KphuL9E/tggQHWXtFsUMrTvItYGnFw/edit?utm_content=DAF0KphuL9E&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, here it is! I just used a placeholder for his faceclaim, so you’re welcome to change that! Let me know if you would prefer gray or any other changes 🙂

@rae

I really liked it!

Everyone else already mentioned the main thing I noticed, which was everything was a little confusing. There were a lot of run-on sentences that had so much action and I was unable to keep track of who was doing what. 😅 But besides that I thought it was really good and I am very intrigued.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, got it!

@freedomwriter76

Waaait, so what’s the fanfic about???

You have peaked my interest with that first part…👀

@smiley

AHHHH

I love this idea, Miley!! I love everyone you included including this new OC…

@smiley

Ohh interesting… I like him!

@freedomwriter76

Hmm very interesting.. I’ll assume a marvel fanfic? Is hydra controlling a city? XD

@hybridlore

Well it’s kind of a long story buuuut…….

While Sef is being abused, Lilitu gets visions of it, but he doesn’t know it’s her. Then he gets these urges from God to help her somehow, but he ignores them because he thinks it’s all in his head.

And then he finds out about her being abused and he feels really guilty because he feels…[Read more]

@rae

I like it too! I did notice it was a little confusing like the others said, but it sounds like you’ve got that covered!

@savannah_grace2009

I like those scenes!

@rae

Nooo! 😭😭😭😭

@savannah_grace2009

@savannah_gray2009

Okay, sure! So, something I didn’t ask for Sef but what are his like character arc themes? Does he struggle with feeling abandoned, rejected, feel like he has to take care of Self? Things like that, just so I know what kind of quotes to put.

Okay, sounds great! If you could maybe try to send the link for the photo, that might work?

@jonas

I guess it’s just a VERY LARGE eagle….XD

@jonas

I just looked it up and apparently an eagle can barely carry 20 pounds….. 

Oh, well….it’s fantasy so…….

@jonas

Yep, lol

@rae

i love that scene!!!!!!!

@jonas

Marcurious

“Rideable?” Marcurious screeched. “If you think I will allow you to ‘ride’ me like a horse, than you are sorely mistaken!” the man glared at him. “Fine. But you will not ride me.”

So Marcurious closed his eyes and changed into a large eagle. Before the man knew what was happening, Marcurious launched up and grabbed the man…[Read more]

Oh, and I don’t know what the theme color would be, probably light blue/gray? Idk, you can decide.

@hybridlore

Hey, do you want to make another one for Lilitu?

He has black hair with blue streaks in it, he has a twisted foot so he limps a lot. He was saved from the river as a baby because his parents set him adrift to save him from being kidnapped by the Pythonos. He was rescued and adopted by a loving couple. He has a crush on Sef but can’t…[Read more]

Marcurious

He watched in awe as Vethe was choked by a black vapor. Cool! Well, it wasn’t cool for Vethe, but seriously, those king’s powers were awesome! Except the fact that he almost killed someone, but still…

“Fetch her! You will not, I can,” the king said.

Marcurious seriously did not want to be Vethe right now…