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I love how the swords keep naming the elk for their owners XD

@beth-torres @hybridlore

I never really thought of OCD like that before. Now reading what you guys go through, I actually might have it, because you just described how I feel about my writing. Idk.

@jonas

You got that? Ottoline is now in possession of a red crystal sword. Use it wisely!

I’ll try XD

Let’s hope Marcurious doesn’t try to take it for himself lol

@trailblazer @hybridlore

Ok so this is something I’ve been trying to figure out how to balance, too! On the one hand, I recognize that God has given me a gift to write, and I want to use and grow that gift, but then on the other hand, writing takes a lot of mental space, and I feel like it’s so easy for me to get lost in a story I’m writing, and t…

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@acancello Goodnight!!

Ottoline

“I’m thinking Ever,” Ottoline patted her Elk’s neck. “You should name yours Aero.”

“Aero?” Hugo laughed. “That’s…just not for him.”

“Do you have any better ideas?” Ottoline challenged.

“No,” Hugo stammered, and then added quickly, “But give me a few minutes, and I’ll have one.”

“Sure,” Ottoline said sarcastically.

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo

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He tried to look cool on the elk and now Ottoline was asking him to name it.

“Why not something like…Willow? Or Ivy? Or Nimrod?” she smiled.

He pushed aside all her ideas and concentrated, “How about something like… I dunno… Elkie?”

“That has got to be the most idiotic name in the history of the world…[Read more]

@acancello

Aww that was so sweet!

Ottoline

“What are you going to name yours?” she asked Hugo, burying her small hands in her elk’s rose fur.

“I don’t know, probably Hugo Junior.”

“That is so boring,” she laughed. “And what if its a girl?”

“Then Ottoline Junior, obviously!”

“Why not something like…Willow? Or Ivy? Or Nimrod?” she smiled.

@rae

They are!!!

@rae

I KNOW RIGHT?????????

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo

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“We seriously have to ride elk?” Hugo asked no one in particular, “Why not something cooler like a tiger or a horse?”
He noticed that Ottoline was standing by hers and not getting on.

“What are you waiting for?” He laughed. “It’s not gonna bite you…”

“I don’t see you on yours either,” She smirked, turning…[Read more]

Fracture

“Well, a chicken is a very fluffy bird that lays eggs. Essentially it poops breakfast.” he giggled. “This is fun!I’ve never had to explain to someone what a chicken is! Beethoven is a song writer of classical music.”

@karissa-chmil

I’ll have to think about it. Maybe I’ll ask my parents for a subscription as a Christmas gift XD

@rae

Fracture

He scoffed indignantly. “If you don’t know what a chicken is,” Fracture giggled a little. How silly! And they called him a man-child when this man didn’t even know what a chicken was! “Then I think you don’t deserve to know.”

@acancello We should transition to riding the elk, as much as I want to keep doing our Hottoline scenes…

Ottoline

She approached the large elk, with a sense of awe. This animal was huge…it could trample her in a moment…but it didn’t. It just stood there, eyeing her curiously. She reached out to touch it’s soft muzzle, and it’s warm breath…[Read more]

@rae

Unless your new-to-riding charries go galloping or jumping

Well, you don’t really jump in a Western saddle, but we can for this RP if you want. XD

@keilah-h

Personally I’d rather be planning a story than scrolling through tiktok though lol

Yeah, same. I don’t even have tiktok, My phone’s too dumb to comprehend it. (I have a flip phone…)

@whalekeeper

Thank you! That’s something that sounds neat to try. I’ll work on it!

@acancello

It does help…thanks girl! <3

@hybridlore

I used to use word, but when i switched to public school, our chromebooks didn’t have Word, so I had to use Google Docs. I then became used to Google Docs and honestly prefer that to Word, because if you forget to push “save” on Word, all your work is gone and you can never get it back. Also, I like the heading feature on Google Docs,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

And the “Ottoline Walton” line was SOOO something Marcurious would say…you nailed it!

Thank you!!

@rae

Putting last names together! XD, my big brother did that when he found out who my crush was!This scene is sooooooooo sweet!

Thank you! My little brother does that to me also, lol XD

@savannah_grace2009

Everyone above gave such great advice that I dont really have much to add. I sometimes worry about things too, that my book is to dark and I worry that my style changes throughout the WIP. I also doubt myself, but I realized that I shouldn’t be, you are the only one who can tell the story you are telling. It may be hard to…[Read more]