SleepwalkingMK

@kaya-young  The first part would flow much better if you separated the topics like this:

“You did a really good job with your prayer!”
“Thanks.”
Who wrote it again?”
“It was Teresa of Avalanna.”

And obviously you can put the non-dialogue parts where you find the most fitting.

At the end of the second part, maybe occasionally tell what the ch…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  Nope, I’m not writing a book. My top project right now is the KPA 😛

Welllll I have a novella. But it’s stuck fast XP

I’m signing off. See you later!

@ariella-newheart  Isn’t it?

Goodbye! *Vulcan salutes* #LLAP

@ariella-newheart  I love weird families XD

Have you seen just like a general picture of Leonard Nimoy? Look one up. Early warning: It’s really freaky 0.o

@jenwriter17  Ahh, okay. Wow, I guess this idea did work! I was growing quite unconfident about it

How’s your book coming? (Dystopian, right?)

@ariella-newheart  Yeah, I can’t do it either. Wait, is it humanly possible?! I suppose so — I’ve seen Leonard Nimoy do it, whoever he is…

Can you do the salute? I can, but I know several people who can’t

@ariella-newheart  I have never seen Enterprise, so I wouldn’t know the episode names XD

But yeah… I don’t like it either. I don’t intend to watch it anytime soon

Have you seen TOS?

@jenwriter17  I’m the same way XD

Is this… the first time that a Readers’ Corner meeting actually worked?

@jenwriter17  So… What time will the discussion be? Is there going to be a set time?

@jenwriter17  Ahhh, church history… That stuff doesn’t stick to my brain. I don’t know about you XD *pats head (mane?) back*

@jenwriter17  Yep! Trying to make sense of this chemistry book… *squints at periodic table*

@ariella-newheart  I mean aren’t there some… undignified parts?

@kaya-young  It depends on what your dialogue looks like. If you post a piece here or something, I’d be more than happy to give you some pointers 🙂

Overall, my best piece of advice is to make sure that your characters’ vocab isn’t far-fetched. Especially if your story is contemporary or futuristic. For example, this sentence, “Can we progress…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  I’d like to try! I might be busy though

@jenwriter17  WAIT! I’M HERE! *groans*

Anyway, I’m here, reading for school, too

@Dekreel All right, thank you for the Les Mis part. 😂

@Ethryndal No problem, Miraz dude. *resumes seat unconcernedly*

(Thank you for getting that quote stuck in my head for the next 48 hours.)

@epicaddie2  HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! 😀

I’ll pray for your sister and family <3

@dragon-snapper  Well… Daniel’s name also starts with a Da, so….. *cocks head*

@sam-kowal  I agree with @supermonkey42. Right up there with Chaucer, too! He wrote adventure poems…