SleepwalkingMK

@dekreel That would be amazing! Yes, I’d love to see Marissa! 🙂 I have aged her two years since I posted her description, so now she’s fourteen, a little less-rounded and much taller, but I’d love to see her, whichever age you draw 😀 Thank you so much! This makes me so happy 😀

@livgiordano That would be cool! 😀 At this point, though, the closest date we are thinking of coming back is in 1.5 years, so it’ll be a long wait 😐

@livgiordano Oh, yes, that might help 😛 Oh nice! I’m from Eastern PA, so we’d be neighbors 😀

@clairec Exactly 😀

@livgiordano Oh, wow, you’re perceptive then 😀 I’ve had several online classmates I had interacted with for months before they figured out I lived overseas. I guess they just thought I liked staying up late XD Where are you from?

@livgiordano Hey! Yeah, I am an MK 😀 I live in Romania. It is hard to catch, unless you notice that I keep posting in the middle of the night 😛

@livgiordano Hello, Olivia! I’m super late, but hiiiiii! This is Adora I.–Y-dubber and alpha of BNIS 😀 Welcome 🙂 Great to see you on here!

@aratrea Hm, for some reason I thought I’d posted in here. Both my post in the discussion and here somehow aren’t here anymore 😛

I’m not sure I did this right, but here goes.

Theme: Purpose in life/what to live for

Plot goal: To get back home, back to the way it was (the way she wants)

Thematic goal: To help, doing what she can in the…[Read more]

@bella-d Hi Bella! Welcome, welcome 😀 Are you in YWW? If so, I’m Adora from YWWC.

Oh goodness. I just finished reading On the Dark Sea of Darkness and it has become one of my favorites. Thank you so much for this video! I’m off to watch it 😀

@aratrea I can think of several examples from the Bible. In 1 & 2 Kings especially, when so many bad kings are overthrown and a few faithful survive. Or when the Babylonians captured Judah, and everything looked awful, but it was to draw the people of Israel (protagonist) back to God; we know more of the story, that the Messiah did come. Would…[Read more]

@aratrea Thanks so much! I emailed her 🙂

@ingridrd Aww, thanks! And thank you for your comment! It was much needed 😀

@dekreel Thanks so much! I’ll keep that in mind as I edit it.

@supermonkey42 Thank you 🙂

@jane-maree Thank you for your comments! They’ve helped so much! 😀

@xonos-darkgrate I think I recognize the second one from the Avengers: Infinity War trailer… Is it Thanos? And is three Ultron? I’m not sure though. My Avengers knowledge is a bit rusty 😛

@aratrea No need to apologize! I’ve needed quite some time to mull over this arc anyway. 🙂

Oh, a foreshadowing scene like that would definitely help. Thank you! I was planning on her still having trouble submitting out of habit even in the resolution area.

I’ve been thinking a lot about this third EiL… the second one, where she changes to he…[Read more]

@aratrea Thanks for this video! I love characters and positive character arcs, and I hope to show change in a realistic way for readers to relate to. Thanks so much for teaching this in such a good and understandable way! It’s worth a lot 🙂

1. The characteristic moment

Protagonist argues with her parents as they pack to move across the kingdom…[Read more]

I’m not sure if I have a favorite positive character arc, so I’m going to go with The Horse and His Boy, which has three amazing ones: Shasta, Aravis, and Bree. Shasta perhaps changes more outwardly than inwardly, but his views about adults and lying and such change dramatically as he turns from slave boy to prince. Aravis goes from a haughty…[Read more]