Skredder

@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson (if you’d like to read it too 🙂 ) Chapter 7! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_aD1ola1rVG3cFwLSZ8S87nBtL7_j1xCdWK0rpUgpek/edit

@skredder Cool! I should be able to read it all tonight 🙂

@ingridrd I’d be glad to critique this 🙂

But, y’all, this’ll be my last critique/beta/alpha reading job for a while. The upcoming months are going to be pretty busy (a few trips out of town, getting my WIP ready for an editor at Realm Makers, my equestrian team season starting, beginning a blog). I’ll finished reading for @skredder and @seekjusti…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking
Kay would rather relive it.
She refuses to tell me what it was though…

Alexandria Evergreen (Alex) would rather talk about it.
Sneaking to the Northern part of Evergreen forest.

@sarah-Anson
Kay would sit in the cell with her worst enemy, Alice, and hope she doesn’t go insane. She doesn’t want someone she likes to hate her…[Read more]

@sarah-Anson I agree with @skredder @gh24682468999 @ariel-Ashira . Interview your character, write him in a different scene, flesh out your character.
But in edition something you could do for fun (though it will probably help) is to make a collage for him. I had to figure out somethings when I made my collages. Also got me excited about my book. 😋

@skredder My character (Rin) would probably rather fly. Since she lives in the city, it would come in handy 🙂

@skredder Awesome! I’ll try to read it tonight 😉

@rochellaine @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira @skredder Anyone writing?

Ah, okay. Thanks! @skredder

@skredder Oh, you set that up on your profile page. It’s the signature setting.

@skredder Totally! Plus, I think it makes characters much more interesting when they don’t always do what’s right, or are even adverse to doing what’s right until the very end of the book. It makes me root for them more, and want them to change.

Btw, How do you put in the little line between your comment and your username? I can’t seem to figure…[Read more]

Interesting idea, @skredder. I’ll try it out. Kirin is a great guy, but I really don’t want him to have “Hero Syndrome” (As in he does everything right just because it’s right.). And I also don’t want him to be an anti-hero, because it doesn’t fit. So he needs to have enough moral strength to do the right things sometimes, but he also needs to be…[Read more]

@skredder Stellar! I should be able to start reading it some time tonight 🙂 I think the pace you’re putting the links out is good, since I’m reading for Seekjustice too.

@skredder @seekjustice Here’s chapter 6! 🙂

And fear not, I’ll be putting off writing a little bit to catch up on reading both of your books *cough*because*cough*Seekjustice writes too fast for me to keep up *cough* 😉

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PruwKQKCOSdDVpAvs_Avwubpf4wrdfiW-cFHg_WDtcE/edit?usp=sharing

@alia If you call 1:30 a.m. early… 😉

@ariel-ashira I think my favorite song from SBfSB would have to be Bless Yore Beautiful Hide.  However, close behind it are Wonderful, Wonderful Day and Sobbin’ Women. 😛  Don’t Howard Keel and Jane Powell have amazing singing voices?

*puts hands over ears*  No, no, no!  Don’t make me kill my cha…[Read more]

HI ALL! I knew this is a high-traffic topic, so I wanted to let people know here; Nadine Brandes is doing a giveaway on her website for some books by Veronica Roth ( 😀 ). It’s international, so here’s the link if anyone wants to take part:

https://nadinebrandes.com/2018/04/25/veronica-roth-giveaway/ 

@jane-maree @rochellaine @seekjustice…[Read more]