Skredder

@alia @rochellaine @seekjustice @dekreel @valtmy

Anyone on?

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @dekreel @valtmy

Anyone around?

signing off now…

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @dekreel @valtmy

I’ll be on for a bit tonight. 🙂 Anyone around?

@rochellaine

Thanks!

I should probably go now too. Bye! Thanks for chatting! 😀

@rochellaine

Lol it definitely does get crazy XD

Awesome, thanks! Don’t feel bad if you end up not being able to get to it tho. 🙂 It’s only about 12k words long. I guess you could say it’s kinda futuristic/pre-apocalyptic??? Here’s a short blurb I am literally making up on the spot 😛

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14 days until the meteor hits Earth.

336 hours until…[Read more]

@alia

Thanks. 🙂 I’ll be looking for beta readers at some point soon; would either of you be interested?

@rochellaine

Bye, Alia! Nice chatting with you.

@alia

That sounds so cool! I’m retelling Red Riding Hood.

@rochellaine

Ooh, researching is so fun! Especially about lifestyles. 😀

😀 No, I don’t think I’ve really made it well-known that I’m working on a retelling. It kind of came unexpectedly and I’m writing it by the seat of my pants (both freeing and terrifying, let me tell you). It’s a Red Riding Hood retelling.

@alia

Yup. 🙂 What fairytale are you using for your retelling?

@alia

So cool that we both have fairytale retellings we’re working on. 😉

@rochellaine

Hi! 😀 I’ve been great. How are you? I heard about your engagement; I’m so happy for you! <3

@rochellaine @alia

Hellooo! You both still on?

signing off for now…

@rochellaine @seekjustice @alia @catwing @dekreel @valtmy

Hi. 🙂 I’ll be here for a little while.

I totally see what you mean:) the rats need to have a mention in one of the other stories, Because like you said we never hear of them again *gives you a gold medal* that is a great piece of feedback. Let me tell you the story of how this book started, I always wanted to write a children’s book since I was little but when I tried, nothing worked n…[Read more]

Just hopping in real quick to say a hUGE CONGRATULATIONS TO @rochellaine ! 😀 That is so exciting and I wish you all the best and all the brightest blessings on this new season of your life! <3

@michelle Sweet 😀

Do you think it’s publishable? Definitely!

Does it keep your interest? Yep! My only minor suggestion would be to make the rats pop up a little more in the story. They’re kind of just in there for the first chapter and then never mentioned again, which to me felt kinda awkward … but that might just be me being overly picky…[Read more]

@michelle Hey! I finished your book; it was really sweet! Quick question: where do you want me to answer the feedback questions? On here, or on the book doc itself in the comments or something?

@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @dekreel @valtmy @catwing @ariel-ashira

I’ll be on here for a little while tonight. 🙂 Anyone on?