@skredder
Active 5 years, 8 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrenluther04 Sorry I wasn’t able to get to answering this sooner. @rochellaine did an excellent job explaining it, though. I don’t think there’s anything I can add to it really.
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Gotta go now. See y’all later!
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Hallu! Is anyone one for right now? I am for the next fifteen minutes.
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@notawriter Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
At the risk of spoilers, it is research Casse had conducted to discover about the guards. It has something to do with her current probation. 😉
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Skredder replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@clairec Oh wow! I’m so glad that y’all’re safe! Praise the Lord!! 😀
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrenluther04 Thank you! I’m glad you liked it! It is part of a novel I’m working on called Clouded Fury. So, any questions that pop up from reading this short story will be answered there. However, I haven’t decided if I want this to be a scene in the actual story. If I don’t, I’ll still need a scene that achieves the same basic ending that…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine I figured out what you meant by the point of view. I’ll see what I can do to fix it. Thanks. 🙂
I have the unfortunate habit of writing in third person omniscient and I don’t always take that into account.
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@gh24682468999 Okay, I made a few changes to the story. I added a little to the beginning and a little to the end. Hopefully, that will clear up a few things. I’m worried about adding any more in case it gets to spoilery for the full story. I had mentioned a little bit about her being on probation at the beginning, but it was a single…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you for reading!
Unfortunately, this is not a stand-alone story. To add in all of the necessary background, it would have to be a whole lot longer. And to add it in would take away from the scene, I thought. A lot of your questions will be answered in the full story, in addition to more suspicious behavior on her part. You are…[Read more]
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Skredder started the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey Folks,
I’ve written a short story based on my novel Clouded Fury. It’s just to give me an idea about my MC and her interaction with another person and with her memories.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DtJUfCBJBk-beHpCIdVAMIw5sN3w4D-qNxRIFVfxw4o/edit?usp=sharing
Here’s the link if you’d like to read it. If you could tell me what you…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel Um…I guess you could say it’s medieval fantasy. The only thing fantasy about it is that the places I talk about aren’t real.
Pizza Ninja!!
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel I’m working on my short story for Clouded Fury. It’s almost done! 😀
What about you?
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel Heyo!
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong @rochellaine Howdy, Folks! 🙂
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel I had this one math teacher who was the absolute best at teaching. Before I had him I couldn’t really get math even though I enjoyed it. With him I was top of the class. In one class we were studying annuities, so he played the JG Wentworth commercial about fifty times. Everyone still had it in their heads the next times class met. And…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Oi, I take offense at you saying math is boring! *just joking*
If I were to say my least favorite subject would be biology(too much memorizing terms) and anything that is purely conceptual with no visual representation and more exceptions to the rules than there are rules.
My favorites would be math, chemistry, physics, and anything…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you read something horribly written (cringe-worthy) and have a desperate urge to rewrite it.
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Skredder replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@joisebeth Oh, please read A Wrinkle in Time! I absolutely love that book and the series. I will admit, though, that my favorite in the series is A Swiftly Tilting Planet, maybe because I read it first. They are still so good. 🙂
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Skredder replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@joisebeth Welcome, welcome, welcome! It’s great to have you aboard!
Are you reading anything right now?
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I gotta go now. I’ve got some dinner dishes to dry. 🙂 Good luck, everybody!
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