Skredder

@juliawrites4christ I used to play, but it’s been a long time since I’ve even tried to play.

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Here’s part 3. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vhngZCcRJ3KqsR5pyyydZAe4dvSNaWav70v5JnrTqwo/edit?usp=sharing

If you thought the other two parts were adorable, then the ending to this one will knock your socks off. 🙂

@skye Wahoo! Piano Guys and The Princess Bride! 😀

@skye Welcome, welcome, welcome! It’s great to have you aboard!

You said you like reading mysteries. Have you read the old Nancy Drew books?

@juliawrites4christ Welcome, welcome, welcome! It’s great to have you aboard! 🙂

How long have to been playing the piano?

@seekjustice I’ve read the prologue, and so far I like it. I haven’t had time to read the rest yet. So many things have happened today that I didn’t want to get started and then be forced to walk away to do something else. I will get to it tomorrow. Well, tomorrow for me at least. This I promise. 🙂

@seekjustice I got 452. I was so sure I wouldn’t pass 400, ’cause I kept making so many mistakes. Thanks for the word war!

Hello, @rochellaine! I’m sorry but I’ve got to go to bed now. My eyes aren’t wanting to stay open anymore.

@seekjustice How did you do?

@seekjustice Ten minutes works great!

@seekjustice Sure, provided it’s not too long of one. Too long and I start to daydream badly. 🙂

Hallu! I be here, doin’ some word sprints. 🙂

@mnvalentine Shorter would probably help. I don’t think you necessarily need more conflict as much as you should capitalize on the conflict you’ve got. Humor would also help move the story on a bit faster. 🙂

@jenwriter17 I’m really excited for when you get to parts 4 and 5. I’m going to put up 3 tomorrow and I’ll put up 4 and 5 on Wednesday because I may be gone later this week. Also, 4 and 5 should be read as close together as possible. But, yeah, I can’t wait until you get there! 😀

@mnvalentine Thank you for letting us read this. I have to say that I am pretty curious as to what happens after this chapter. But, it does seem a bit stagnant. It didn’t feel like anything was really moving. Even the part where they had to rush to move everything in a week didn’t feel hurried. The characters themselves didn’t seem to move much.…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Through the majority of the story, it will be told from Casse’s POV. There are a few times where I will go into another character’s POV. Like I did with Evelyn in this one. The majority, like 96% of the story is going to be from Casse’s POV.

Head-hopping is a big problem I know I have and one of the things that I really need to fix…[Read more]

@seekjustice This is gonna be good! I also requested access. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Alright-y then! Here’s part 2. It’s a bit longer than part 1. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xt0Mg5mn3HJW2aIZvbheF66fFbkISe567zs-KRVw7N0/edit?usp=sharing

@that_writer_girl_99 By all means, read away! 🙂

Sorry about the POV issue. I can’t seem to stay in one head. I will fix that when I edit the story. It’s supposed to be Casse’s POV.

@ariel-ashira Yes, I did.

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice

When y’all are ready for part 2 let me know, and I can have it up rather quickly. 🙂