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Joy replied to the topic Hi, I'm Ari! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariella-newheart KP videos… Well I really like the How to Write the Worst ….. Ever series, so definitely watch those. They don’t have to be in order (for the record, my two favorites are Allegory and Dystopian. The former is when the word “Kapeefer” got started)
Sooo… Long story short, it doesn’t matter where you start just WATCH THEM ALL!
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@notawriter Actually he said “mid back,” not mid black X)
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper If you feel like there’s too much emotion bogging your story down, your scene sequel ratio may be off. K. M. Weiland has a series of articles about structuring scenes that may be helpful.
If it’s smaller scale that you’re dealing with, my advice is to write the first draft and then do adjustments in revisions, when you can evaluate…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Alrighty, guys…
I could use some help on this front. I’ve learned pretty well over the past few months how to show and not tell, but I actually am using that too much.
Don’t get me wrong. Always show over tell, but my problem is that I’m focusing way too much on the emotion. And Ike… Zelaya, they’ve all gone dismal.
How do I refocus my…[Read more]
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introvert_girl replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@valtmy I wholehearteadly beleaf you 😉
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introvert_girl replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal I’m planning on jumping on the Kapeefer fanfic train, and had some questions about Stan, and didn’t want to make a new thread just to ask. So I was wondering whether or not Stan can fly, aprox. how large he is, and what color he is?
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Snapper replied to the topic Out of season NaNoWriMo update in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c HANNAAAAHH! Hi and welcome back!
Ooh, yikes, I’m so glad you’re okay. 🙂
Comical autobiography… that sounds hilarious. 😛 Is it about you?
Up to?
Up to much mischief, my dear friend…
I finished my third novel, working on the fourth now. Also started a blog, the link of which you can find down there in ze signature.
I also…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD
Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.
Frozen Raspberry
Bland,
And the gray of night,
Shivering hands.
No light.
I couldn’t fight,
Tasteless.
I couldn’t write…
Numbness.
Why?
A question…
A question for the sky.
Of this evil infection?
Why the gray,
Does…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@skredder Haha! My sibling and I used to play with the chess pieces like that! Give them voices and all that jazz X)
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introvert_girl replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel I agree with the others, that it could benefit from more tension. I’d also try to think of ways to make the main characters more distinct from each other. This could also be a source of conflict, not that they dislike each other, but that different personalities can create obstacles they have to overcome because they care about each…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you hear about someone else’s experiences and think: “Hey! I can make a character like that!”
All the time. Can’t keep up with it 😛
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
You know you’re a writer when, as you’re playing solitaire, you’re forming a story idea in your mind about four kingdoms who were scattered apart by enemies, and are forced to cooperate and work together to rebuild them
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 That’s okay! XD
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 Oh, and YES! Totally leave comments! 😀
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@gabbyj Sure!
BTW your signature is awesome 😉
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrenluther04 All right. Dog it is! 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’d imagine somewhere in the tween-early teen age, since that’s how old the MCs are, but I don’t know for sure
@sam-kowal @valtmy Thank you both so much! It helps a lot 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@skredder I’m going to sign off, too. Good luck on your project!
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose Byeee!
@skredder Ahh. Forgive me for my ignorance *scratches head*
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