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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 What about the beginning confused you? What do you think could be done to make it more clear?
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Snapper replied to the topic Salvete! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@elly I’m sorry for my lateness. I guess you could say that I’m toast. 😛
Anyways…welcome to the forum, enjoy the fun, and watch out for dragons. 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic Greetings, all! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@lola-jane I’m late…*sniff sniff* I’m sorry.
Anyways…HELLO! *blows you away with giant dragon hello!*
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 (sorry, just trying to tag you. 😛 )
Nuts. Did I really type the title as Shorty?
@daeus Are you able to make it ‘Short Story-Mystery’ ? 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e9
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c9e3
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Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and can’t…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose I did quite well. I wrote a little over a thousand words, which is what I was aiming for. Good luck on your college stuff!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose I am here!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’ll be right back, but I need to work on about fifteen minutes of school, maybe less.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @daeus I have some editing and writing and brainstorming I need to do.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@audrey-caylin @daeus @ethryndal @winter-rose @jane-maree I’m going to head off now, I wrote 1974 words and finished a short story. Thanks all!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@audrey-caylin Sure thing! I won’t be here for much longer, but a few more minutes.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jess Farewell from Rivendell!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jess Welcome to Rivendell!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal 1002!!!!!! AMAZING! Looks like lembas works for one thing, 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Greetings!
@winter-rose We’re back to being a five-string bass guitar. 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jane-maree You don’t think there’s any way to maybe make it materialize in my oven do you???
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jane-marie You don’t think there’s any way to maybe make it materialize in my oven do you???
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