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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Problem in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@joy First off, your story sounds so cool. I kinda love it, actually. 🙂
I don’t have an immediate preference between option A or B, but I would add that something to keep in mind, is your protagonist’s character development. I would ask which situation is the better opportunity to show his growth as a person.
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Snapper replied to the topic Problem in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@joy I’d say to go with the first one, mainly because I’ve heard of a lot of literature where the king has to ‘go on the run’. The first one, to me, sounds more original, and interesting. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic School Name? in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 10 months ago
And he comes to us for suggestions of names?

Yeah. I have no idea. You’d think a former fantasy writer would have a dictionary replete with such names, but I’ve never had a strong suit for that.
Only things I can think of are:
1) Lamb Technique School… [another loki facepalm please]
2) Writing School of Excellence
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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Haha Vector is my favorite Despicable Me character! No, it’s not him.
*Sigh* Fine, it’s Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Aww, sorry! How bout a cameo appearence, then? (You don’t have to fill in the form thing)
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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Aww, never seen Moana!
@perfectfifths  Keep guessing!!
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel Glad to be of service! *curtsies*
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Writing Letters Within a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon Whenever I write or receive letters, it’s always fun to send/get small items along with them, like pressed flowers or leaves, photographs, clippings from magazines, or whatever will fit in an envelope, really.
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel This isn’t an idea of what to do, exactly, but there’s an article on Go Teen Writers website about writing the middle of your story that might help you?
http://goteenwriters.blogspot.com/2012/08/writing-cream.htmlI also like K.M. Weiland’s articles about the three act structure. But if you’re not an outliner that may not be as useful.
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Joy replied to the topic I need a character's name! + other stuff ;D in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@emily @photobloggergal Have either of you heard of the YouTube channel “Player Piano?” If you like the Piano Guys, I think you’ll like this. The pianist is named Sonya Belousova. She could listen to a song ONCE, and then play it beautifully! Even if she’s never heard the song before! She has done many popular songs like “Bohemian Rhapsody” and s…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
DEE-kreel… Ohhhh… Ah! I like it! Thanks, @introvert_girl, you just saved me a lot of awkwardness!
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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper A Narnia movie? Pth I don’t know!
Here’s one. It’s not obscure but…:
“Hi! I’m Victor! Wanna know how I died?!”
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Joy replied to the topic I need a character's name! + other stuff ;D in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@photobloggergal That’s so beautiful…. Teach me! Advise me! School me if you have to!
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel I read it as dee-kreel, if that helps *shrug* but pronounce it however you like 😉
@dragon-snapper I agree. I think the films were trying to do different things, which is okay, I guess. But Force Awakens was setting up new characters we were meant to be invested in, because we’ll be following them for this new trilogy at least, and I’d…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel *processing*
Okay, so a middle of a story. I know absolutely nothing about Doctor Who, but I’m thinking you could add more clues as to whoever this Riddler person is (I skimmed the Thirteen plus Five thing, BTW). Some scenes could include traveling through this planet, searching for the answer to the riddle. Suggestions – 1) performing…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel @perfectfifths Yes. Yes. I was mean. Sorry. 😛
@lady-iliara *blink* I have no idea…
If I am to put a quote out there, then I won’t do another KP obscure one. One that should get this topic’s engine running. 😉
“It’s man’s discovery of Nunya.”
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Snapper replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@introvert_girl Really? You liked Force Awakens better?

Aha! I’m not alone! I liked it way better than Rogue One. Just couldn’t connect with the characters…or the plot of Rogue One.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Letters Within a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon I am a little late, but I hope not by too much. 😀
So…letters eh? Um… With some of my letters I like to talk about what I’ve been working on recently. If your characters are Christians, they can talk a bit about God too. Also, big events, even if its something that only in the news. Coal mine news is certainly interesting. There…[Read more]
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