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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@daeus I know I haven’t read your book, but I thought I might be able to at least help you with your title. 🙂 I like the second one best. I don’t much care for the last one; it sounds a little too unoriginal. If you want to convey time travel in the title though, none of these seem to show that. And I agree with what Josiah said about the first…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago
@TheAcornMan Yeah…I’ve read that most of the movies of it aren’t very accurate to the book. 😛 But the book is REALLY good. Unabridged.
I like the LotR books and movies, both in different ways. Have you seen the movies, but don’t like ’em?
Heh. 😀 Go bury yourself in the library for a bit. Maybe that’ll help. -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy *rolls eyes* Yah yah yah. *never says never*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy *scowls* Everything is possible. And everything is connected. So never say never. *scowls harder*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy Ah, stop raining on my parade. XD
Yeah. But the like…time travel…symbols? What even would there be. Nothing there seems it would be dramatic enough for the dramatic feel of the book. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy ha! Well, that’s definitely a symbol. 😛 *coughs* I was thinking though… ya know… like… time travel??*cough**cough*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy @Daeus Symbol? EAGLE, EAGLE, EAGLE! To Soar Like Eagles.…
*snort* I KNOW. But that’s all I’ve ever been able to think of when I’ve thought what you could name it.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago
@TheAcornMan Ha! That’s funny. Yup, I really love Victor Hugo’s Les Miserables. Have you read it?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus of the three I like the last one best, but none of them are really jumping out to me as worthy of the story. Is there something… less generic? Maybe something that more obviously says ‘time travel’?
All three of those also seem slightly forced, theme-wise. *scrunches self down in chair and trails off into unhelpful muttering* I don’t…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago
@TheAcornMan Hi and welcome! It’s really so cool to have a Brit here now. We have an Irish person but no English.
I’m 16 soon to be 17 and play the violin too, and love British history. 🙂 Do you have a favorite book?(@GracieGirl then we’re almost the same age! *high-five* My birthday’s in early-mid January…sooo, about one month or so before…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Protection in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Yep. 110% what they said.
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago
@salome01w4g There was also Cornwallis, who was a British officer in the American Revolution.
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Gracie replied to the topic Protection in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Emily *pops in* The Gracies agree with the Hannahs and the Janes. 😀 *pops out*
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Gracie replied to the topic Hello! I'm Aislinn in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago
@Aislinn-Mollisong Yeah, it takes a few tries at the test to figure out your type. I actually prefer to just read the descriptions of each type and decide for myself, but that takes a lot of time. XD
@Dragon-Snapper *swishes cloak and cackles evilly* YESSSS. WE HAVE THE DRAGONSES SURROUNDED, PRECIOUS. YES, YEEESSSSSS.
@Emily You’re an ESFJ?!…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Inspiration for an Art-icle (pun intended) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Mariposa Sorry it’s taken me so long to get back to you on this!
I’m probably biased as well, but I think self-teaching is the way to go too. XD
Yes, I think an inspirational article like you mentioned is a great idea. 😀 And I love to read it when it’s finished! (Totally up to you though, of course. 😉 )AGH, I LOVE RATATOUILLE!! That’s like…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 EXCELLENT! I’ll be praying for continued safety.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
*blinks* Bye all….is anyone still there?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
I find that if I let it go all the way to 70, it gets really weird. Like, it’ll miss a post of mine, or it’ll send me back to the first page.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@daeus @salome01w4g @daughteroftheking I’ll be writing a few short essays for school. *melts desk* Oh look. Now I can’t…
*desk magically reappears*
Oh.
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