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And if she was there (she does later have a confrontation with her, Callan and November) she isn’t at that place in her character to fight back );

@loopylin sadly no XD

@loopylin awww thx!! I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD

@whalekeeper for me I feel like my writing isn’t like…good enough? Like it’s too childish? or…idk…not (mature isn’t the right word…) like I don’t like doing descriptions…so def description writing, but I just feel like its not great. I feel like I wrote better in the past and that thought process stinks so I try not to dwell on it…

ANYWAYYY if u want to read the scenes I’ve got…it’s November scenes… (good luck gang…don’t hate me XD)

here’s the first one! (btw I’m not looking for critiques. this is a draft and idk how the writing is honestly…im not super happy but im just getting words down.)

And its not super linear cuz Im not doing Ara’s…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Alrighty!! I’ll be sure to ask if I run across anything. 😀

Feel free to shoot random details if you want. The more you give the better—even if they seem bland.

😁😁

@freed_and_redeemed

Perfecto!! I’ll start on them as soon as I’m done with the others!! 😃😄

Esther, I also think it’s so cool how you write about small everyday struggles. It’s hard to find beauty in the mundane, when it seems the same day after day.

But in your writing, you can make even the everyday struggles, the repeating tasks beautiful, and everything you write has a message, and I think it’s so cool!!!! And I know God will use you <33

@esther-c

Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!

I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜

I never really thought about it that way!! But that makes a lot of sense!!

Honestly I’ve struggled a lot with the way that I just go to the hard things that need to be talked about…people like my parents have said that my…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Lol, yup! 😌😜

@freed_and_redeemed

Ayyy I’d be honored to draw one lol!!  lolol Eeeeee if you decide on one do let me know!!!! 😃😃😃

it may take a lil bit coz I’m a bit back up but I’ll get to it lolz 😝

@koshka

My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even accidentally imply it’s okay. You don’t want to give your reader an idea, or thought pattern they didn’t have, but you do want to reach for a kid who’s been there, or is there, and needs that lifeline. That they are loved, that they can make it with God’s he…

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@keilah-h

Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”

I think I will keep the Payne/Pythonos. I agree, it would be cool!!!!

Thanks, they fit really well and I lik…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah… 😳 I was seriously stressed out.

Lol XD

I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)

Thank you!!

Yeah folds…they’re really crazy sometimes… XD XD

@the_lost-journal

Ahhhh, ok. Yeah that sounds less scary. Very interesting.

@the_lost-journal

lol sounds good! I’ll start on him today!

I am glad you stopped…

Lol what does that mean? I messed up pretty bad, eh? 😂

@the_lost-journal

😅 Here is what i started… you may not find it to be that creepy but yeah… eh.

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGguWkF7Mc/U0X3iH97DvRJ8OV5IIsXJQ/view?utm_content=DAGguWkF7Mc&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=uniquelinks&utlId=h5741d86fd1

I think i messed up a little—like he needed to hang more rathe…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You’re so welcome!! Yay, I’m glad you like it!! 😃🥰