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@savannah_grace2009

lol. Alright, so I’m still collecting my thoughts a bit, but here’s what I took down so far:

When a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to become a warrior comes to the southern Burnish orphanages, five of the one hundred competent orphans chose to become warriors. Among those was the quiet and loyal Shrapti Yelper, son of the…[Read more]

@grcr

Okay, what is your story about? I’m intrigued, your mood boards are really interesting!

@jonas

Is this better?

“Scared you?” The boy smirked. His voice was weak, and his hands trembled a bit, but he lifted his chin, and wet his lips with the determination of a warrior, shaking his mess of black hair out of his eyes. His eyes fell on Ottoline. “That’s low,” he looked at the Traitor. “You’re going to have a girl kill me?” Ottoline…

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@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

GUYS….thoughts on this book cover??? I made it last night and idk if I love it or hate it….

@jonas

So, with Marcurious’ concern that Ottoline will want revenge, maybe you could put that in later, the next time they see each other. It seems odd that Marcurious, while he is suffering from the effects of poison and surrounded by his captors, is worried that a fellow prisoner might attack him. He doesn’t even have to notice her, given the…

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@whalekeeper

It’s just when you spend all your time learning to understand other people, you forget to develop your own sense of self, you know? It doesn’t come as easy.

That’s me when I’ve been writing for too long…

@whalekeeper

BrUH I knOw I look sweet and gentle on the outside, but you ain’t seen my stupid side.

😂😂😂 I feel that, lol

Boys are….boys.

@jonas

Although, would that really be the top of his concerns when he sees Ottoline? Both of them are in prison and she’s only part-Azer, so it doesn’t quite seem logical that he would be legitimately worried about her trying to get revenge. It’s a funny reaction, but it relies a lot on the reader connecting all the dots.

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@rae

lol. A RP is short for role play.

@lightoverdarkness6

tysm!!!! <3

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas

Yeah, I didn’t think about it much. I assumed that Ottoline was there simply to scare Marcurious, and to scare her by witnessing his pain. It is a bit of a weird moment though because he assumes that Ottoline was there to torture him, but then we see him just being tortured from her perspective. It’s not that this scene…[Read more]

@jonas

okay, i’ll keep that in mind.

In the past two years he had:

• Managed to offend the entire branch of Azers. Let’s just say it involved some dirty words, nearly poisoning their president with a bit of Blue Death leaves (how was he supposed to know they were poisonous?), and a bomb. He was now on the run from blood thirsty Azers bent on r…

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@jonas

Oh, sorry. I guess I didn’t make that clear.

No, the Pythonos just injected Marcurious with a poison to take away his powers (not permanently, just as long as he recieves the medication), and they made Ottoline watch so that she would fear them, but also because they don’t like to wait so they wanted her ready to take his place to…[Read more]

I’m (kinda) bored, so I am going to share another one of my NaNoWriMo novel’s character boards…

Soo… here is the one I made for Dehilikor (Deh-hily-core)… I am not too happy with it though, mostly because I cannot find a good picture that matches what I imagine him to look like… the one I used was the closest, but in my imagination, he…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, so in his “list of accomplishments” it says that he managed to offend the entire branch of Azers (he’s really good at offending people), and their all out to get revenge. So he’s scared the Ottoline heard about what he did.

Usually when he says, well, I’m dead, that’s just his catch phrase, so he normally doesn’t die, but comes…[Read more]

@grcr

Thanks XD

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, yours are great too!!

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @esther-c

I will not allow this RP to die!!!!

haha

who wants to write the next RP?

@grcr

Why are yours so good??? I’m jealous, lol

here is another one of the MCs… this is Douger’s board…