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@everyone

Can I have help with this scene? It seems really…idk, I just don’t like it for some reason. It could be that it’s out of place in my book, but I’m not sure.

Here it is:

Sef sat in a field of wildflowers, her eyes shining brighter than the sun overhead.

A smile graced her lips, and her hair fell in verdant waves down her back.

With…

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Reuben

“Deeply wounded indeed,” Reuben scoffed. “If that tablecloth meant the world to her, then maybe she shouldn’t have it.”

Marcurious

He sat up, rubbing his head. The first thing he saw was two people trying to kill each other.

“Hey, guys,” he said, standing up. “Um…do you know where we are?” He asked. They ignored him. “You know, most people usually take being ignored as offensive.” Still no answer. “Well, if you’re going to fight, who’s side should I be on?”

Do you want me to just bring her to the dorms? Or where should she show up at?

@everyone

Meet Livia Stone!

I haven’t developed her character much, but she’s from the world of Andromeda. She’s an Aquino, which means she can manipulate water, she has blue hair, eyes, and skin.

She loves animals, especially horses. (can she bring her horse Xandro? It’s totally fine if she can’t XD)

She is sarcastic at times, but she’s a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sounds good! Look forward to ranting about the lore!

@rae

Oh, okay, tysm!! <3

@calyhuge

lol

@grcr

If you don’t mind my commenting on your scene, I don’t think it’s that graphic.

Oh, good XD I get a little paranoid…lol

@savannah_grace2009

If you don’t mind my commenting on your scene, I don’t think it’s that graphic.

And neither am i XD

@calyhuge

please tell me you are a guy because I’m kinda out of place here as the only guy on the RP

Unfortunately for you, Rae is not a guy. Sorry….

@everyone

*timidly steps in the room and begins to speak in a small voice*

Umm can I also add a charrie?

@freedomwriter76

I reread it…and I do think it’s a little graphic…but I’m trying to show how Satan whispers lies in our ears to break our will, etc.

Iver is actually a Pythonos, essentially a messenger of Satan (though he’s not called that in my allegory) that is sent to break Sef so that she’ll never know her worth and so that she’ll forget…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Well, you can hint at it without it being graphic.

It’s hard to find that happy medium. I don’t want to be too vague, and I want to show the character’s pain and how it affects them. But I don’t want to be graphic. Does that make sense? If you don’t mind, could you  share one of the abuse scenes in your book so I can see how…[Read more]

@grcr

I love Flaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@freedomwriter76

I assure you that they are not all abused, ok?? XD

Yeah…sorry for generalizing all your charries, lol I know they’re all different to you and have different stories. Maybe I just get them all confused and it seems like they’re all different but I’m really thinking of the same charries??? (I should make a family tree to keep them…[Read more]

@rae @jonas

I’m also the oldest. I don’t usually punch my little siblings, lol. I don’t dare mess with my little sister, cuz she’s a gymnast and is way stronger than me! She usually tends to win “fights” XD

Well, I am the oldest sibling, but I still do it to a variety of other people, lol.

lol!