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I’m bored. WE NEED MORE CHAOS!!!!!!

@jonas

Sorry I couldn’t help more! Plotting is just really new to me….so it’s hard to give good advice XD

…that everyone must stay ten miles away from them, or else…

@jonas

The website says that the Hook is the inciting incident (so maybe I plotted wrong, XD). Apparently the First Plot Point is the point of no return, where your character takes action and there’s no going back. It’s the first significant event of the story.

@jonas

…lazy. They are then…

Shunned in the most difficult way possible, meaning…

@acancello

I will!!! I love them so much <3

…their brains disintegrate with how easy it is and they become…

@jonas

Any member of the Diffi Cult found guilty of taking the easier and/or more straightforward path is subjected to…

picking up a ball, and putting it back down. The task is so easy that…

@jonas

Hmm. Good question. I’m not exactly sure how to explain it, partly because I don’t understand it that well. But from what I understand, the Hook is what grabs the reader’s attention. Like in my story, for example, the “hook” would be when Neveah gives birth to Hanna. It disrupts Sef’s natural world, however, it doesn’t really force her to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 Eloy and Cass are the perfect brothers! Please tag me if you write/post more!

….in caves in the mountains, along the streets, anywhere that makes surviving as hard as possible…

@acancello

This is all I’ve written in the next chapter:

The next morning, Lilitu walked out of his room, wearing actual clothes this time.

He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Sef sleeping on the couch. Then all the memories from last night came rushing back. Why was she here? What had happened? Where were his parents?

Sef’s green hair f…

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Introducing the Diffi Cult! The Cult of Diffi worships the god Diffi, who teaches that absolutely everything one does should be as difficult to do as possible. The god Diffi makes everything so hard for itself that it’s…

@jonas

Yeah, that could be interesting. The perception thing I still think if given to the right person with the right mental discipline, they could do a lot if there isn’t so much of a specific form of “power” you receive. Perhaps it could always be intellectual power, or influential power, ect. If that were the case though, if you could give up…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

The ones Rae gave you are really good! Have you written the next chapter yet? (I want to see how this ends 🙂 )

@savannah_grace2009

 Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

Lol! Thank you!!

@kathleenramm

I’ve noticed this as well.

@jonas

Fair enough. I feel like there could be logical loopholes still to get around that. Like in the case of getting a robotic arm to replace an existing arm, what if you control your perception enough, to say “I give my “flesh arm” for a “metal appendage with these qualities” or something like that. As long as you can convince yourself that it…[Read more]

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom

Here’s my next chapter… if you have romance, LOOK AWAY lol!

Chapter 6: Raindrops

Lilitu was sitting on the steps, minding his own business, like any sensible person would do.

He was watching the wind sway the trees, listening to their whispers.

Often, he would sit and try to make sense of what…[Read more]

@rae

Lol!