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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Why is Riker like all my bois rapped into one rn? Seriously, Alpha’s afraid he’ll hurt those he loves, Chase feels like he let down his mother in not protecting her. Nahim is just…my poor Nahim, I cried over him last night.
I think I finally figured out why I like Riker so much.
So, if you’ll excuse me, I’ll finally let…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
WHYYY
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you for everything Whaley!! This means a lot <3
Both ways work well!! Whatever makes more sense to you; I’m just throwing random ideas to help you brainstorm
Ohhhh gotcha! Thanks XD
I think what Jonas was mentioning (please correct me if I’m wrong!) is before, there was some moral grayness and room for human variation, esp…
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Loopy replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I was going to do this challenge, but I slept in and then had to run some errands instead. 😞
I think I’m going to try for two hours starting now. I know that isn’t much, but it’s better than the nothing I’ve been doing for years lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Nice! You’re getting good at realism
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@y’all
I think I’m going to take a break from this rp. Not sure for how long. Maybe three weeks?
You know I’ll be back. I’m addicted XD
And I’ll probably wait until after I do the scene with Felicity and Lois on the roof before I actually leave.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Ok, I understood it much better than I thought I did. The only part that I didn’t already get was if Seb had knocked them unconscious or just made their brains all fuzzy.
Thanks for explaining! I think the lovedream magic system is really interesting and I get excited when you talk about it. -
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h He’s needed counseling since he was a teenager🫠
and I’M SORRY. At least Leon is at the start of his redemption.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@acancello Hiiiii girlie!!! *hugs* 💖💖
Totally understand; you do what God has called you to do <3 And Happy Birthday!!!! And yessss, ughhhhhh, the humidity down here in the South is horrid🥵🔥
and I’m doing well! ‘Broken Shackles’, the sequel to ‘Freedom’s Fire’, is almost at 55k words, and mostly going smoothly!! Riker is breaking my heart, but…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@rae that looks amazing!!!
and yes, I would love to hear it 💖
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @koshka @ellette_giselle @anyone-else
Anyone want a Riker scene? 👀
Fair warning…Riker is about to plunge into another dark place, and is about to separate himself from everyone that has ever loved him, until he literally comes to the end of himself, and thus this scene may cause some…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Well…look at my novel!
It has several dark elements, like child abuse, child neglect/abandonment, murder, evil guys running the world, hatred, prison camps, etc.
But the reason these elements are in my story is because my story is an allegory about Light and Darkness, good and evil!
I think your story is fine (unless you’re…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
The greatest enjoyment I got from the prologue was the twist from ‘we’re doing this to save the baby’ to ‘what’s this baby doing here?’ That was great.
Really?!?! That’s awesome…I guess I’m keeping it now XD XD
You should think about how strong of an allegory you want. Once you say Jesus, all readers will know this is a Christian a…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Wow…this is a lot to think about and really helpful! Thank you!!
I don’t think there’s anything wrong with it as it is, it really evokes a certain mood, and has really strong imagery.
Okay good XD
Yeah, the first line of the book is always the hardest because that’s how the readers decide whether or not to keep reading!
These three par…
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Ruth replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@anybody
Challenge ideas: (plz help me add to this list)
- Write as many words as you can in one hour.
- Write a short story a day for one week
- Try to write a short story/snippet in the style of your favorite author(s)
- Try to edit double the number of chapters you usually do in one day.
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Ruth replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Update
I’M DONE!!!!!!
It’s not exact, but I am proud to announce I finished around 12 hours of writing! I wrote somewhere around 9000 words, but after going through and editing sections, I was left with only about 8700 words of progress. Not as far as I hoped, but that’s still about nine days of work for me in one day!I’m thinking about making…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium Oh I haven’t heard that one p. I’ll have to listen to it later.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Nice pfp :]
Teleportation was the only part of Seb’s powers I felt like I understood, lol. What did he just do to Caly’s characters? I’m not sure I completely followed.
Lois
He hesitated, fiddling with a pencil in one hand.
“…Sure,” he said finally.
“Yeah?”
“Yeah. After art class is done?”
“Sounds good.”
“Thanks, Marce…[Read more]
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