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Loopy replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
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RAE started the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
So…this is a scene that I wrote at like 11:00 last night. It hasn’t been edited so sorry if it’s a total mess.
I’m not looking for any particular things like grammar and such, I’d just kinda like whatever feedback you can give me. Maybe how the scene effected you? Idk. Anyways, this is from Chapter 19…
Ash. Thick and heavy in the air, coating…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Alpha
“What I meant by ‘at bay’ is keeping it under control, as on keeping it from exploding out in a sudden uncontrollable burst. I’ll explain more later. For now, I believe that masked woman is here to ask us some questions.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Alpha
Alpha raised a black eyebrow, studying Rax up and down as if he had never seen him before. He held out his hand and grasped Rax’s wrist.
“We do do something similar to a handshake. I was simply being rude. I apologize.” Alpha bowed his head. “My name is Alpha Grath. So you’re a fire elemental who also can heal, that means you…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
In Realn culture, you grab wrists, I think I showed you that before, so alpha should have accepted Rax’s hand anyways. He was just being purposefully rude for whatever reason.
he’ll probably apologize later…and he’ll also ask about Rax’s power and maybe even share a demonstration of his if Rax can convince…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @ellette-giselle @koshka
alpha
Alpha stood, still not accepting the man’s hand. “Don’t feel sorry about it. I like throwing knives at people, and since you were making comments about possibly being able to save that man if you were there, I figured you somehow knew him, and were after Silvia too. Speaking of the poor girl,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle
Alpha
“I already called them after the man was killed. It surprises me that they haven’t arrived yet.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
Alpha knocked away the guy’s hand. “Firstly, I didn’t murder in cold blood. The man was holding a knife to that little girl’s throat, so I killed him to save her. If I had murdered him, I would have killed Silvia too, then gone looking for my sister and killed her. It is the sad truth that if…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
“Sorry, can’t promise you I won’t fight…or be a danger. Those follow me like stray kittens.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
“Oh, yeah, the guy who wants to kill me wants to heal me too. Totally not suspicious that he wants me to let down my guard.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka @raxforge @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
Alpha
As his fighting opponent apologized to Marcel, Alpha leaned again against the wall. His heart rate had elevated, his breathing was labored, and dizzyness and nausea was beginning to set in.
“To answer your question, I mortally wounded him because he had a knife to Silvia’s throat. They were…[Read more]
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RAE posted an update 1 month ago
I can tell the difference between fantasy and reality, but sometimes I don’t want to.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Well…now it’s longer
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
Healing abilities too? Not good. If I can’t end this quickly… Alpha gritted his teeth, moving away from the wall.
“Against elementals of great power, few powerless men can stand. But you are not powerless, Elqin. You will be the most powerful warrior the Galaxy has ever seen, if you but em…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Uh…I think we need to ignore my last rp.
Sorry, Whaley, I didn’t see yours in time.
Hold on….let me rewrite mine…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Alpha
Healing abilities too? Not good. If I can’t end this quickly…Â Alpha gritted his teeth, moving away from the wall.
“Against elementals of great power, few powerless men can stand. But you are not powerless, Elqin. You will be the most powerful warrior the Galaxy has ever seen, if you but embrace what your father gave you. You…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
woah, I didn’t expect it to be that long…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Alpha
Fire abilities, eh? Interesting. Alpha cast the shirt he was using to stop the bleeding of his wound away, rolling his right shoulder. “Nothing I haven’t dealt with before.” Alpha ran elemental protocol through his head, watching his opponent, looking for openings. Usually a Realn would rely on their armor in this situation. I…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
So am I kicked out of this RP, and if so and it was my fault I am so so sorry! 😓
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
You are NOT kicked out of this RP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You’re good!
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