SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

I like the revisal. Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?

Anyway, I it is a good introduction to Ottoline’s character. An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who…[Read more]

@everyone I put all the characters in age order if this helps anyone trying to visualize them.

Felix Baumann- 31 (but he’s married)

Kate Harrison- 29

Hans Baumann-28

James Harrison- 25 (but he’s taken)

Hudson Thurman- 22

Isabella and Blair Jefferson-21

Anna Harrison- 20

Adeline Thurman-19

Will McKinley- 17

Bennett Thurman and Christine…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I know you also said Tina doesn’t really have time for boys but that might just add to the story, if Bennett finds her spunkiness interesting and they start off just as friends because Tina doesn’t want to think about a relationship, and then later on realizes she likes him. Maybe Bennett gets to know Will first, but takes…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I think Bennett and Christine would fit together really well! Unfortunately, he’s not at this part due to a mishap earlier in the day (mentioned in my earlier RP) but he’ll be coming around in the future. They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Its good! You’re not too late! I don’t think there’s anything too important to know… it’s still pretty early in….

You may know already, but there is a party at the Baumann’s house and everyone is invited.

@smiley @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c

Just an idea… but I think Hans and Anna would be cute together… I know @grcr suggested Anderson Thurman could try to arrange a marriage between Adeline and Hans, but maybe we could use that to our advantage. Neither Hans or Adeline want…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 you’re welcome!

@trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @grcr

Okay Y’all, here’s my charries

I honestly love the period in history so I’m excited

The Harrisons (from an old novel idea set in 1912, but I’m changing that and a few other things)

Kate (29)

A strong yet classy lady, she’s stubborn and has a h…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr

THE HOUSE

Teapots rattle in the cabinets. Kaine looks down as the floor shifts under his feet, wavering like water.

“Hello, new residents of this beautiful riverfront cabin. Excuse me, I’m flattering myself. “Who is this?”, you may ask?” A loud voice echoes from the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer

Hugo 

Ottoline found him within minutes. She did really care for him, his eyes must have made her feel sorry for him. No, he didn’t want anyone to feel sorry for him. Ever.

He sat down by the pillar and tried to stop the tears as she came over, but it was…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore

Here is a little more….

A few weeks later, I was perched on a hard wooden pew listening to one of Reverend Bradshaw’s sermons on the mercy of God. Clara was seated next to me, her fingers playing with the handkerchief in her lap.

“Rise for the closing hymn,” Reverend Bradshaw directed. We rose, and as throa…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 nice board!

@savannah_grace2009

They are so sweet together!😭 💗 I think I’m going to share Hugos story in the next scene ill write later tonight, I feel so bad having his story told again, Its so sad!

Hottoline forever!!

This is literally the most adorable scene you wrote, I almost cried 🙂

She found him, behind a pillar.

He was crying.

She sat down…

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@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr

Kaine

Kaine wanders over to the couch absentmindedly as Hugo rushes out of the room. Lifting his backpack off his shoulders, he slowly opens it to see a small furry face poking out. Kaine’s cat, fluffy, sleepily looks around the new environment as he lifts her from…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr

Hugo 

It was awful to wake up, but even more awful to be woken up by a girl crying out in pain.

“Ottoline… Ottoline!” He said gently touching her shoulder, “are you alright?”

Her whole body was shaking with fright and tears began to slide down her…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

It should be locked, that will be fun!

@savannah_grace2009

😂

@mineralizedwritings @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer

I’d be good with that if everyone wants to! lol

Lane

“Yup.” Lane said thoughtfully.

He put his foot on the ground. He looked off into the distance again. A terrible thought dawned on him, and he squinted. Am I about to stay here all night? No… surely not…

Lane…[Read more]

@grcr @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazor

Kaine

“Oh boy, I’ve done enough talking. Anyway, where are you from, Kaine?”

Kaine gives the boy a quizzical look as he stands on one leg like a flamingo.

And goodness, for fashions sake? Caps are to protect your eyes from the sun!

“I live west of the Crevasse. A bit above the west…[Read more]