@savannah_grace2009
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@hanako @jonas @grcr @highscribe (to lazy to find your actual tag) @savannah_grace2009
Nahim
Before Ottoline could answer there was a shout of someone murdering each other. Nahim spun, alarmed, hand unhooking his sword ready for anything. Ellis, Zahlin and two new people Nahim hadn’t met were all in an argument, Zahlin looking ready to kill a…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Tis true
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I mean, she could’ve had a crush before her family moved… but I didn’t think that far back lol. It doesn’t really matter for the sake of the story though. I’ll try to update this again soon.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @grcr @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-i-missed
Kari
Kari observed the conversations in the room as she slowly ate the food on the table before her. She was too hungry to care about whether or not she was being poisoned; besides, why would the queen want to…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @rar @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @freedomwriter76 (Sorry to tag you twice, everyone. I had to fix an error and this format is better I think)
Recap
Ottoline: Being approached by Nahim. Hugo is somewhere nearby.
Lane: Unknown
Flaz: Annoying Ellis as he tries to…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Attention all!
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @rae @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @freedomwriter76 (I think I got everyone)
Due to the large amount of people RPing, it seems that people keep getting confused with what’s happening, so to fix that, I’m going to start doing a daily recap. This won…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
“Well, what I wanted to ask you was how well you use that bow of yours? And if you are willing to work as a team. ‘Divided we stand, divided we fall, but if united we stand, we will not fall.’”
Very direct XD
Probably the best way to approach this topic, actually.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
That’s funny, I’ve been pronouncing it that way, but I never thought that it might be pronounced differently. The way it’s spelled it could easily be pronounced “ot-ol-in-ay” or something like that although that would be pretty silly!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Nahim
“She’s alright.” Nahim spun around. All it was was one of guys he had seen at the party. Nahim looked at Ottoline. She was still trembling a little, but she seemed relieved by the presence of the other man. “She’s just a little on edge.” ‘Yeh, she’s afraid of me.’
“Ottoline, that’s a pretty name, it fits you. Well, w…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh man! This will be interesting.
Also, how domyiu correctly pronounce ‘Ottoline?’
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
“I-I-I’m Ottoline.” The girl clasped her hands. She was trembling.
“Are you alright?” ‘She better not be scared of me.’ “Are you chilled?”
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a “gentleman” to kill me himself! He probably told him terrible things about me…
oh that’s funny 😂
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Finally getting back to this… but here’s a little more!
My fifteenth birthday came and went. After school let out for the spring, there was a lot of work to be done on the homestead to plant our crops and gardens.
The summer term of school began, and it was my final term of school. As I walked into the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I assumed so. Though you’d think he would be less annoyed when he saw her crying and literally freaking out. Anyway, sorry if it seems like I’m “mad” at him or attacking your character. I’m not, just trying to understand him more XD
Ellis isn’t very emotionally astute, lol. Even though he’s gone through a lot of hard thin…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Nahim
Nahim breathed deeply. In the corner there was the girl who had tried to kill the Queen. ‘She would side with us, right?’ He walked up to her, and smiled under his helmet (like she would be able to see that 🙄) and said to her in a kind voice,
“Hello, My name is Lord Nahim.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Would it be okay if Nahim approached her?
Yeah, Nahim and Ellis do frighten her. Poor girl.
Though, I’m very pleased that Nahim got along so well with Ellis, that rolled along nicely. 🙂
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
From Ellis’s perspective, that’s what it was, basically. He could tell that she was scared of him at first, but he has no idea why. If he knew what she had been thinking, he might be a bit more sympathetic, or he might just be annoyed that she assumed bad things about him, lol. He’s also exaggerating a bit here, since he was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
How would Ottoline react to Nahim now? I know she was terrified of him before, has anything changed?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Bye bye!! 🙃
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m glad it doesn’t snow like that where I am. We do get some snow, and I enjoy a pretty snow here and there, but after one big storm I’m done for the year lol. I prefer 70 degrees and sunshine. It’s supposed to be getting up to 80 this weekend, which is a little unusual for October.
Sounds good! Should we have @rae…[Read more]
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