SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@esther-c @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer

Heres a new part!

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A boy in tan robes walked up to Hugo. He looked friendly.

“Hello, my name is Amir. You are Hugo, right?”

Hugo grinned, “Hey, yeah. I’m Hugo. Nice to meet you!” They shook hands.

“It seems like no one knows how they got here, like no one sent…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Oh girl, that sounds like me! The braids all the way… and I had a bonnet, but unfortunately no dress. I used to create forts with bedsheets and pretend I was in a covered wagon lol.

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @I-think-I-got_everyone-XD

Oh and just so everyone knows, Amir is wearing a tan, robe-like outfit that looks wrapped around his body. But instead of being a robe all the way through, the lower section splits off into wide-legged pants. He’s wearing soft s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello @anyone else

Kari 

My phone! Kari, standing off to the side, suddenly remembered. Why hadn’t she thought of it before? If she could call someone, then perhaps they could assure her she was fine, and hadn’t lost her sanity. She jerked her phone from her back pocket, turning on the home s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I am unsure if I missed a chapter or not. Are we just tossed in with Lilitiu and Sef, or did I miss something important? Anyway, I thought the chapter was great! This line:

They knew for a fact that they were being hunted by the Pythonos,

Feels a bit clunky. But other than that, great!

@savannah_grace2009

I think I missed some of the chapters, but I read this one anyway. Needless to say, I didn’t really know what was going on, but I enjoyed it regardless!

One thing that could be improved is right at the end. They decide to jump off the cliff super quickly, but it seems like they still have a bit of time. Most people aren’t goi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ahh man, I literally just barely missed the next chapter reveal. I guess I’ll have to read it tomorrow🙃

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I’m finally gonna get through the rest of your chapters:

I enjoyed chapter 3. It functions as a proper first chapter (Lilitu is the real main character, right?), all the previous ones seemed more like a series of prologues. This is fine, The Way of Kings, the first book of the Stormlight Archives by Brandon Sanderson did…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I suppose that’s a working explanation. Where Christ is the solid, the Holy Spirit is the liquid, and Heavenly Father is gas, expressing the hierarchy of God’s physical manifestation. Both solid and liquid are confined to this earth, whereas gas can permeate through all of space. I like that explanation more than the egg one.

Once…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol, me too! 🥱 Goodnighty!

@savannah_grace2009

lol. 😅

@savannah_grace2009

Cool. It’s 9:30 over here. I have to get off at 10:00 though….

@savannah_grace2009

Hi! lol!

@mineralizedwritings

Thank goodness!

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings (I guess I’ll tag you again lol)

Alright! I am here!

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t mind if Kari and Ottoline don’t get along at first! A little conflict is good for the story. Kari’s faith is a big part of her life so that sort of seeps out of her, but as a little background she’s had some stuff in her past, too. Not nearly as intense as Ottoline’s, but her father died in an accident when she was…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer

Yall. I just realized my entire last rp didn’t upload… but I had it backed up in a word document! I hardly ever do that XD!!

Kaine

Kaine shudders, crossing his arms over his dark green sweater vest. A stiff breeze edges through the tight weave of his shirt, pushing…[Read more]

@acancello @savannah_grace2009

Alrighty! I’ll be back in a little while… like maybe in one or two hours…. soo yeah…

@savannah_grace2009

Sounds good! Hugo may try to impress her more than once though, he can be a total show off, lol!