SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@acancello

thanks 😊 yeah, he’s one of my favorite characters 😄

@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium

lol 😂

@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Alrighty… Here is another RP from my boys….

Lane

“What now?” (I’m picking up from what Kari said…btw)

Lane turned towards Kari and thought for a moment. We should just wait. We need instructions. We’ll have to wait. M…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium

Lillen.

I’ve heard this question asked, and I feel I must answer it, lest the grace of the flower be shamed.

Milk-skinned are her people, with pastel eyes that can tell no lies. Sweet are her flowers, that adorn the land all the year round. Tis a tropical place, with winter rainy but ever blooming. Tis…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas

I thought I’d just mention that the thing about the name being an acronym is that suggests that it is actually English, and not Andromedan. Using the word Unit is fine, because we know that in the world, it’s just called something that means the same thing, but to acknowledge the individual letters in the story makes it…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium

Who’s going next? I can’t, because my character basically has to wait until the rest of the group leaves the house. Unless he just goes on ahead and doesn’t meet up with the rest of them until they get to…wherever they’re going? That…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig @Savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @euoida-vision @smiley @anyone!

Few new posts on my blog, nothing to exciting, but there is some 😂

acancello.blogspot.com

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah 😅 though to be fair, his planet is smaller than Earth, and thus has less gravity so people tend to be a bit taller. He’s still a couple inches taller than most people though.

I was just talking about what the general area looked like.

@GRCR

lol 😂

@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009

Yeah… I thought we were just gonna make it up as we went…

@savannah_grace2009

So I guess that chapter by itself doesn’t seem necessary, but the Pythonos is going to kidnap her and Jyron and use them as hostages so that their father will provide military forces and supplies to start a war against the Paynes.

Okay, it’s definitely essential then.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, yeah. That definitely works.

@savannah_grace2009

The chapter looks good 👍🏻

The only thing to think about is whether this is essential, considering Liv’s position as a less important than the others. I’m not saying it is or isn’t, I don’t think I know enough to judge, but just something to think about. You probably want to keep Liv’s story as concise as possible, so anythi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You keep asking, though, why it is the “unit” and how is it the definition of the word. I tend to be lazy and not overthink it. Correct me if I’m wrong but does it really matter why it’s called that? If so, why does it matter?

If you use an already existing word, people will naturally expect that there is some sort of explana…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t think it’s too common to have talking horses. Highly intelligent horses are pretty common, but they don’t always talk. I think the idea could work, but I think it would be a bit odd to have one variety of horse for each race. Maybe just one type?

EU does stand for European Union in real life, so that might be weird…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

What would the P in EP? Stand for? You might still be able to call it the Unit, even if there are multiple units, because the prisoners would fear it the most, so they might call it that even if there are technically multiple.

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Plotting isn’t always easy for me, so that’s encouraging to hear. 😊

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium

I’m just going to post Ellis’s arrival scene now. It ends kind of abruptly because I don’t have anything for him to do before he encounters the rest of the group.

Ellis

One moment, the din of battle rang on Ellis’s ears as he charged t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Do you still want some help with the UNIT’s name?

If you want to go with an acronym, I think the first step should be to brainstorm words starting with U, N, I, or T that relate to what the UNIT is. (I think using the word ‘terminal’ would be cool for the ‘T.’)

If you want to go with a non-acronym, then we need to think…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer

By the way, could someone give me a quick rundown of what characters are in here already? How many are there, and what are their names? I think I’ve read it all at this point, so I’ll probably recognize them based on their names, but I can’t remember who is he…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer

(I tried to edit this, but it disappeared when I did, so hopefully this doesn’t tag everyone twice.)

So where is the house now? I know it transported them across worlds, but where, geographically, is it? I would assume it is somewhere near a city, since they…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr  @esther-c @mineralizedwritings@rae @trailblazer

So where is the house now? I know it transported them across worlds, but where, geographically, is it? I would assume it is somewhere near a city, since they were transported there to help the queen? My character will probably just be dropped in separately o…[Read more]