SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009 @rae

Callista

“I-if I come, I’ll just stand in the back, if you don’t mind,” Chase replied.

Callie smiled. “I don’t mind. I’m just glad you’re coming.” She bit into her pizza. She felt Fynn’s gaze on her and turned to face him. He was giving her a questioning, uncertain look.

She still has a slight smile on her face as she…[Read more]

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She was saying she was fine, and he’s saying that she was not fine because if they didn’t have magic, she might be dead. That is kind of convoluted, I guess. Sorry about that!

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Ellis

“Snake almost killed you,” Ellis told Ottoline flatly. “Endeson odon eld nidir. You feeling alright?”

The company sat around a fire. They had decided to make camp after the attack.

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Possibly, but this still feels kind of nebulas to me, even if it has a impact on him personally.

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Poor Liv!

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Snake

What’s thisssss? Small furry thingy?

The thing had noticed someone. The fire-breathing cat?

We need to—-AAAAGHHSHHSSSHH!!! FLAMES!

After that, it really screamed.

Snake screamed too, clutching his hand…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello

Thanks!! 😊

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I think that would work yes. If he believed that they simply threw him away, then that would be something that would weigh on him heavily. However if this is to slide into the exposition you gave, that would mean he associates the Pythonos with his parents choice, which would suggest that it wasn’t their fault. This is the…[Read more]

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Fynn

“Am I… is it rude to wear a hood while eating in public?”

Fynn shrugged. “I don’t know. If you want people to avoid you, then sure. If you want to look friendly and approachable, then… probably not.” He hoped he didn’t come across at too blunt or rude. He was just giving Chase the facts.

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I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣&#x1f923…

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@thearcaneaxiom @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore

Thank you all for your replies!!

I think I’m leaning towards the taking the place of death more now. Thanks!!

And for those of you sobbing over Amir’s death….

Sorryyyyy 😭

It just has to happen. I know it’s gonna hurt writing it, but I also was planning Amir’s death from the very beginning…[Read more]

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

Thanks! I want to develop their brother-sister relationship more.

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Lol (oh, no, but I’VE ALREADY SAID THAT 🙄)

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Wow, Fracture didn’t even notice that Svlys told him to shut up? I thought he was going to throw a tantrum, for sure! XD

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

Some more….

A week later, Albert left for Little Springs. He never said goodbye to me, and I wished I could apologize for what I’d said. But I just couldn’t bring myself to do it.

The day after he left, I was in the barn milking our cow, Molly. I heard footsteps enter the barn, and turned to see Abe app…[Read more]

@rae

This story is so sad! It’s really good though, well done! I don’t think we need to enforce the deadline. I would want ours to be judged in this case, because I went full comedy, and you were much more serious, so it’s not really possible to realistically compare them in a meaningful way. Thanks for the congrats though!

@rae @savannah_grace20…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry I haven’t responded to this one until now. I think it’s good. All that I would mention is that the history tangent with the pythonos while only a paragraph or two, felt a little sudden. Lilitu is young, and while he may be thinking about these things, I think this part would flow much better if you made it much more of a…[Read more]

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I need help.

I’m trying to choose an ending for my novel. I thought I had it figured out, but now I’m doubting it. Either way, someone is going to die, so read at your own risk.

First, her…[Read more]