Sara

@savannah_grace2009

I love it ❤️ that’s so kind of you (:

@savannah_grace2009

Oh man! I must say creepy!

Goodness, it sure is good though. I really don’t like the decision the parents made. I mean, there’s just no excuse.

I’m excited to find out what happens to the child, though I have some educated guesses. Is this all you have written so far?

I did notice that you changed the wife’s name before…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I really like the changes you’ve made to the prologue!

One typo I noticed, it should be Sevryn here:

“Where will we go?” Selena looked up at him with the brokenness of a small child, and the sight of his wife breaking broke something inside of him.

@savannah_grace2009

Aw, you’re welcome girl ❤️

I can’t believe how I’ve matured since then, in a little over six months. God has really been working in my life, both in my heart and in my writing!

That’s wonderful ☺️

(and you-and several others from KP-will forever be in the acknowledgment page of my novel…if you’re okay with that, that is XD)

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@trailblazer

Yay! I’m glad the second chapter was smoother.

Ah, I’ll keep that in mind. I was trying to portray that Ignatius just thought that Marcus was a scholar and was inquisitive. I guess I need to make that a little clearer. Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

That’s an idea! I felt like the dialogue was a little tiresome near the end, but it…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You’re welcome! I’m glad to know that my advice has been helpful.

I can’t believe how I’ve matured since then, in a little over six months. God has really been working in my life, both in my heart and in my writing!

That’s so great! I know you were having some hard times recently, and it’s good to hear that you’re doin…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh yay!! This is already sounding awesome! I’m so excited!!

@savannah_grace2009

You read all those?!?!?

Pretty much all that came through 😀

That’s okay! Please, please, let me know when you get it published!

Dont worry! Ill let everyone know (:

I get it if you’re not comfortable sharing this, but would  you mind if either I gave you my email or you gave me yours so we can talk sometimes? Again, no pres…

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@savannah_grace2009

Awww sad day :/ that’s okay though! You do whatever you feel is best for you, and what God is calling you too! I have missed you so much 💗💗💗💗💗💗 and I will continue to miss you!!!

❤️ ❤️ ❤️

And sorry for blowing up your email with always tagging you xD I just really missed you! I promise I won’t anymore if you don’t want me to lo…

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@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @anyone

Hi guys!! Man, it’s been a long time since I’ve been on here 🙂 But yeah, lifes been… different? How are you doing? How’s your WIP’s?

About the Pinterest board, well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?).  I was really thinking about it a few months ago and real…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol, ok! Sounds good! 😂😄😄

I should probably do that too, tbh….

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks girl, and I’m sorry about that anxiety! Even if it’s not the same thing I’m experiencing, I know it’s hard to feel that way.

@rae @savannah_grace2009 I feel attacked😂 jkjk. But seriously, the final Hans scene in Freedom’s Fire does break my heart🫠

@ellette-giselle Yessss, we shall get along perfectly😂💖💖

@grcr

So keep the fountain sword scene or not? Now I’m confused. lol.

@savannah_grace2009

No your suggestions are amazing! They are just what I have been looking for!

@savannah_grace2009
OH NO I THINK IT’S WEIRD AGAIN.

@savannah_grace2009

Girl your suggestions were good, though! I haven’t done much research on starting off a book, so it sounds like you have more tools under your belt in that area than I do.

@savannah_grace2009

Ok then. No worries. I’ll split it up. Right now this is just ideas. I mean, you guys are seeing this stuff literal the minute after a type the last word of the chapter. One I get farther into it I’ll have a more concrete setup.

@savannah_grace2009

*sighs in relief* Okay because I was panicking after I posted and then you posted that you really liked the fountain scene…I felt sooo bad lol

I think we were posting over each other… like I didn’t see your comments until after I posted.

@savannah_grace2009

It did that to me the other day… where all the profile pics disappeared and then the format was all crazy. But like you said it fixed itself pretty quickly.

@ellette-giselle

Ok I love what @savannah_grace2009 just said about doing the whole colosseum scene first- that makes a lot of sense!

As far as the fountain scene, I think you could maybe still incorporate that later- maybe not the swordfighting, but perhaps during their conversation they’re sitting outside and the teasing turns into wrestling…[Read more]