SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@esther-c @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings

Hey guys…

I’m going to be entirely inactive at 9:30 pm, and I won’t be back on until October 4th…. Lane can just tag along in whatever happens during this role-play or you guys can just pretend he isn’t there until I come back (I don’t really mind whatever)…. So y…[Read more]

@trailblazer @acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings

Amir

Amir quickly hopped up out of the pile of shoes, bouncing on one foot for a moment as he regained his balance. He pasted on a goofy grin. “I’m fine,” he said with a chortle.

Thankfully, nobody really cared or payed attention to him for very long. But i…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I like the new character you introduced in chapter 4. I don’t think you shared a chapter 7 yet, but I started chapter 6, but it seemed like there was some kind of gap, where the characters are somewhere different without explanation. Is that intentional?

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks! I was inspired to try making magic systems after reading some of Brandon Sanderson’s books. He has a lot of really cool ones, and I decided to try making some myself. This is my best magic system, and I would say none of my others are nearly this good. It isn’t an easy process for me. My process usually starts with a s…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hybridlore
I have created a new character, the villain:

Vilsayor
Vilsayor is a high-ranking nobleman and the leader of a conspiracy to unleash an ancient being from the core of the planet, using Resonance Crystals. He embezzles Resonance Crystals for his followers to use. He has…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey, Sara! How are things going? <3

@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings

Kari

“Are you okay, Amir?” Kari asked, looking at the shattered armor and the boy sprawled in the midst of it. She wanted to laugh, but poor Amir looked so embarrassed that she bit her tongue.

“Yeah, I’m fine,” he muttered, picking himself up. “I hope that…[Read more]

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @I hopeIgoteveyone

Hugo

Ottolines story was horrible, making Hugos seem simple in comparison. She had been through so much, for so long.

“You didn’t deserve that. No one would.” He said, a bit choked up.

Ottoline looked at the floor. He lost control and g…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer

Woah, a lot has happened. lol XD

Amir

Amir watched, his heart crumbling into pieces as he saw Ottoline cry. He wished he could do something, but at the moment, Hugo seemed to be comforting her instead.

But everything was interrupted by a shake of the house.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I like the revisal. Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?

Anyway, I it is a good introduction to Ottoline’s character. An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who…[Read more]

@everyone I put all the characters in age order if this helps anyone trying to visualize them.

Felix Baumann- 31 (but he’s married)

Kate Harrison- 29

Hans Baumann-28

James Harrison- 25 (but he’s taken)

Hudson Thurman- 22

Isabella and Blair Jefferson-21

Anna Harrison- 20

Adeline Thurman-19

Will McKinley- 17

Bennett Thurman and Christine…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I know you also said Tina doesn’t really have time for boys but that might just add to the story, if Bennett finds her spunkiness interesting and they start off just as friends because Tina doesn’t want to think about a relationship, and then later on realizes she likes him. Maybe Bennett gets to know Will first, but takes…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I think Bennett and Christine would fit together really well! Unfortunately, he’s not at this part due to a mishap earlier in the day (mentioned in my earlier RP) but he’ll be coming around in the future. They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Its good! You’re not too late! I don’t think there’s anything too important to know… it’s still pretty early in….

You may know already, but there is a party at the Baumann’s house and everyone is invited.

@smiley @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c

Just an idea… but I think Hans and Anna would be cute together… I know @grcr suggested Anderson Thurman could try to arrange a marriage between Adeline and Hans, but maybe we could use that to our advantage. Neither Hans or Adeline want…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 you’re welcome!

@trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @grcr

Okay Y’all, here’s my charries

I honestly love the period in history so I’m excited

The Harrisons (from an old novel idea set in 1912, but I’m changing that and a few other things)

Kate (29)

A strong yet classy lady, she’s stubborn and has a h…[Read more]