@savannah_grace2009
Active 2 weeks ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Awwwwww!!! So sweet! Super cute.
Only critique would be this line.
looking at her mahnith one last time, before leaving her mahnith
It’s a little repetitive. Otherwise, I love it!
Also, how old are the kids now?
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I don’t hate Hans, I’m just pretty much indifferent on the subject.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
yeah, go ahead and call backup. You’re gonna need it.
High five!
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Except the people who don’t love him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Ok, whatever. I guess I’ll just try to deal wh=ith it. It’s been doing since I started being on here.
I can say what I like, thank you very much. It is America after all.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 1 week ago
@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009
Next section!!
It was nearly dark when the two rose to head back to the house. Turin laid a hand on Aaron’s shoulder. “Aaron, I am sorry,” he said.
“What for?” asked Aaron.
“For the way I have treated you and encouraged Sabina to treat you. We were both wrong, and I am most to blame,” s…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Yep.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I haven’t seen it eat any posts recently, have you? Not since Kathleen banished Wyoh from KP.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 honestly, the only thing about your story that I found iffy for me was the whole Rath-doing-what-he-did-to-Sef’s-mom thing, and I already stated that that’s ok to leave in there if you warn people what they’re getting into before they start the book. Like @ellette-giselle said, Wingfeather and Green Ember have had their…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Chase
Chase nodded. It took him longer this time to make the image appear, but he eventually did. He pictured her smiling as she stroked the bird on her shoulder. “Is it p-pretty?” He asked. “D-did I mess up?”
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
And this one is mostly for myself and @rae
@koshka @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @ellette-giselle @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol
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Hans’ aesthetic🖤
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@esther-c I’m so happy y’all have been here for the journey💖 @grcr TYSM!!! And yay, another vote for Fin!! ✨✨ @koshka All authors do it, thank you😂😂 jkjk, they really are poor babies XD And good thing I’m working on Fin’s aesthetic anyhow XD @savannah_grace2009
Here’s Fin’s aesthetic!!!
(totally didn’t tear up making this one…I miss him,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I think either of us can RP because Calyhuge did write a RP introducing the characters that are about to come interrupt ours. Do you want to? Or should I?
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 Awwwwwww *huge hug* 🥹💖 Girl, I’m so happy and lucky to know you too!!!
aww, ty! I think they’re my fav ones yet😂
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 Following you nowwwwwww 💖💖💖💖
and oh my goodness, girlllll, you have Riker Protection Squad in your pinterest profile???😭🥰🥹
I feel so special!!! 💖🥹🥹
Ty!!!!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 SARAAAAAA
TY SO MUCHHHHHHHH 💖💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰😭😭
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Sure, I can!
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