@savannah_grace2009
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Here’s something short from me…. 😜
Lane
Oh, please don’t let this be a trap. Please, please don’t let this be a trap. Lane followed behind the rest of the group and the queen. Looking to his right, he noticed Flaz sticking close…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @rae @trailblazer @grcr @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @jonas
Kaine
Kaine follows tentativeley as the queenly figure leads the group off. He sighs.
What is this? Are we ever going home?
Kaine watches her closely.
What does she want?
Kaine looks down at his dagger, still strapped firmly to his belt. He…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @rae @trailblazer @grcr @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings (I’m missing someone, right?)
Ellis
”Follow me,” said the woman with a crown. Ellis ducked behind a bush as she left the house, followed by nine other people. None of them were older than Ellis, and some of them were dressed in the most…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 As requested…
There was another shake of the cottage, and the door flew open, dramatic fog swirling behind a tall, but tiny figure.
She wore many layers of light blue and peacock greene, shimmering in the light, blending in the fog. Her bodice was of blue with marbled green, with the sillouttes of black butterfly’s and…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@rae can start if she wants, I really dont know how to start it either 🙂
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fine by me.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @rae @acancello
I think that @rae should start bc she knows the most about Lillen. But that’s just me XD
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Aranel started the topic Killing Characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 8 months ago
@euodia-vision @trailblazer @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @acancello @esther-c @jonas @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @power @rae and anyone else:
What are some good reasons to kill MCs? I have to kill two of them in this one scene because if I don’t, the only option is to use a Deus ex machina, or throw out the scene.
Basically, two characters are…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @rae @acancello
I’m not an expert in the field of fantasy so I’ll probably wait for someone else to get the ball rolling… but if no one else does anything I could just have Kari test the door to see if it opens. They probably should have some direction from someone on what they’re…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I can’t really, cause my character is still separate from everyone else.
I think we just need someone to get things going. If nobody has anything they specifically want to happen before they leave the house, someone should just go for it and start them on there way. How will they know where to go?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
thanks 😊 yeah, he’s one of my favorite characters 😄
@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
lol 😂
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Alrighty… Here is another RP from my boys….
Lane
“What now?” (I’m picking up from what Kari said…btw)
Lane turned towards Kari and thought for a moment. We should just wait. We need instructions. We’ll have to wait. M…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
Lillen.
I’ve heard this question asked, and I feel I must answer it, lest the grace of the flower be shamed.
Milk-skinned are her people, with pastel eyes that can tell no lies. Sweet are her flowers, that adorn the land all the year round. Tis a tropical place, with winter rainy but ever blooming. Tis…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I thought I’d just mention that the thing about the name being an acronym is that suggests that it is actually English, and not Andromedan. Using the word Unit is fine, because we know that in the world, it’s just called something that means the same thing, but to acknowledge the individual letters in the story makes it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
Who’s going next? I can’t, because my character basically has to wait until the rest of the group leaves the house. Unless he just goes on ahead and doesn’t meet up with the rest of them until they get to…wherever they’re going? That…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 8 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @Savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @euoida-vision @smiley @anyone!
Few new posts on my blog, nothing to exciting, but there is some 😂
acancello.blogspot.com
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah 😅 though to be fair, his planet is smaller than Earth, and thus has less gravity so people tend to be a bit taller. He’s still a couple inches taller than most people though.
I was just talking about what the general area looked like.
lol 😂
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
Yeah… I thought we were just gonna make it up as we went…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
So I guess that chapter by itself doesn’t seem necessary, but the Pythonos is going to kidnap her and Jyron and use them as hostages so that their father will provide military forces and supplies to start a war against the Paynes.
Okay, it’s definitely essential then.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, yeah. That definitely works.
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