@savannah_grace2009
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
“I-I-I’m Ottoline.” The girl clasped her hands. She was trembling.
“Are you alright?” ‘She better not be scared of me.’ “Are you chilled?”
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a “gentleman” to kill me himself! He probably told him terrible things about me…
oh that’s funny 😂
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Finally getting back to this… but here’s a little more!
My fifteenth birthday came and went. After school let out for the spring, there was a lot of work to be done on the homestead to plant our crops and gardens.
The summer term of school began, and it was my final term of school. As I walked into the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, I assumed so. Though you’d think he would be less annoyed when he saw her crying and literally freaking out. Anyway, sorry if it seems like I’m “mad” at him or attacking your character. I’m not, just trying to understand him more XD
Ellis isn’t very emotionally astute, lol. Even though he’s gone through a lot of hard thin…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nahim
Nahim breathed deeply. In the corner there was the girl who had tried to kill the Queen. ‘She would side with us, right?’ He walked up to her, and smiled under his helmet (like she would be able to see that 🙄) and said to her in a kind voice,
“Hello, My name is Lord Nahim.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Would it be okay if Nahim approached her?
Yeah, Nahim and Ellis do frighten her. Poor girl.
Though, I’m very pleased that Nahim got along so well with Ellis, that rolled along nicely. 🙂
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
From Ellis’s perspective, that’s what it was, basically. He could tell that she was scared of him at first, but he has no idea why. If he knew what she had been thinking, he might be a bit more sympathetic, or he might just be annoyed that she assumed bad things about him, lol. He’s also exaggerating a bit here, since he was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
How would Ottoline react to Nahim now? I know she was terrified of him before, has anything changed?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Bye bye!! 🙃
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m glad it doesn’t snow like that where I am. We do get some snow, and I enjoy a pretty snow here and there, but after one big storm I’m done for the year lol. I prefer 70 degrees and sunshine. It’s supposed to be getting up to 80 this weekend, which is a little unusual for October.
Sounds good! Should we have @rae…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @everyone
Okay, we’re back to the dining hall. (Well, Ellis went back and I’m assuming Nahim followed. Zahlin is still on his way to the armory, but he’ll probably be back soon, since he won’t have anyone to interact with.) Sorry if it w…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Montana is the coldest state except Alaska, right? We have had pretty warm winters the last few years (sadly) so I find it odd that there’s such a difference between Wisconsin and Montana. Montana isn’t too much farther North.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I don’t want it to be 80 lol. This is supposed to be fall, not summer! That was also just one day. It’s been in the 40s a lot, but today it’s in the 60s. I would like a steady decline in temperature, not jumping all over the place!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
It has to be a little bit nice, right?
I live in Oklahoma and we still have our air conditioner on…. the degrees have been fluctuating, but I can’t wait for it to get/stay cold here…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ll get Ellis back as soon as possible, but the last thing he did was ask Zahlin a question, so Zahlin needs to answer, and then Ellis can go back.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
It’s been cold in Wisconsin too, but it’s raining here. Except a few days ago it was like 80 degrees or something.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lucky!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, I think they’re wrapping up. Zahlin is on a mission to the armory though.
I was thinking “inflamed” might work. It’s tricky because it applies to the sword and it’s user.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, though it’s really late here, so I’ll do it tomorrow.
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