@savannah_grace2009
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ll look at it closer later, but the drawing of Nahim, LOOKS LIKE NAHIM! Down to the hair length!
😊 Well thats good!!
The only thing I can see wrong with it is my own silly fault. Nahim has a scar going into his hair on the right side of his forehead. That’s my fault not yours, otherwise, I see my belovéd Nahim! Exce…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I think Nahim was talking to her.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Here’s the final dragon assignments:
@jonas: tundra/ice
@esther-c: desert/sand
@grcr: swamp/gas
@savannah_grace2009: mountain/storm
@rae: volcano/fire
@highscribeofaetherium: sky/wind, ocean/water, or cavern/earth (pick one)
@keilah-h: jungle or one of the two @highscribe doesn’t pick.Sound good?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m sorry you’re dealing with that right now. As for what your mentor has said, I don’t agree with all of what he said, but I don’t disagree either. He could have been a little kinder, and perhaps given more positive feedback and advice along with what he said, but he did make some good pointers. Some of the things he pointed…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
The reason I had her be abused is to show that God (or in this case, the Great One) can heal broken hearts and he has perfect love. This can still happen if her main conflict is missing her father. This would present the message that a father figure is important for every child to have. That way she still has a little…
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HighScribe replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I pretty much agree with what Jonas said. And I would also say to just take a break. Do something else, get your mind off it, and don’t let it drag you down. And pray about it. That’s the best thing you can possibly do right now.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Hmmm… I see what you mean. If I’m understanding correctly, the issue is that all of the characters are in super hard and depressing situations? My immediate thought is to just have at least one character who isn’t. Now that I think about it, most stories I’ve read don’t have more than one character like that, because is is <…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I think the only thing that’s happened is Hans is taking Anna out to the stables, and Constance (James’ girlfriend) showed up.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
You missed a super tense scene, lol. Probably my favorite one so far.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I present…every POV since you’ve been gone:
Ellis
“SOMEONE HELP US THESE GUYS ARE QUITE POSSIBLY GOING TO MURDER EACH OTHER!”
Ellis jumped as the voice’s shriek filled the room. He whipped around. Zahlin and a young man Ellis hadn’t seen before were standing frozen on the other side of the room.
Ellis scrambled to his feet…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Btw, Rae, GRCR, and Hanako won’t be available most of tomorrow, so things will probably be pretty slow tomorrow.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I fished the recap out. Not much has happened.
Recap
Ottoline: In the corner with Hugo and Nahim.
Lane: At a table somewhere.
Flaz: At a table.
Kari: At a table with Amir and Hedeih.
Kaine: At a table.
Hugo: In the corner with Nahim and Ottoline.
Amir: at a table with Hedeih and Kari.
Hedeih: at a table with Amir and…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I know she’s in a corner, but what exactly do I need to give her POV on?
When you left off, Nahim was talking to her. Then Zahlin and Leon got into an argument. Ellis tried to break it up. Alec arrived and started pointing his gun at people. Nahim fired some warning shots and aimed at Alec. Snake dropped from the sky. Ellis f…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Look at my status update for some information about what we’ve been doing. You could just start reading from where you left off—not too much has actually happened.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I don’t have time to recap right now, but I’ll help as soon as I can.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium “Zahlin, the reason you have no friends is because everything you say sounds like a threat”…lol, sounds just like my charrie Crosshair
@jonas lol those memes are too funny
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer @acancello @esther-c @rae @hanako @freedomwriter76 (wait are u in this rp? didn’t think u were)
oh, btw,…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @rae @anyone!
Heres a really short piece for Hugo. I started writing it a couple days ago so the beginning events are way past 🙂
=-=-=-HUGO=-=-=-
“Ottoline?” Hugo began to yell as they left the safety of the house, he was sure she went out before him.
“Otto- OOF!” Of course…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium
So I know a few people were asking a while back, so I went back to the beginning and got everyone’s character descriptions. @Jonas I dont have Ellis’s though, I couldn’t find it 🙂
Hope this helps! Sorry if I’m missing anyone’s character!
Ruhan Amir al Roshan
(But because of his culture, everyone calls…[Read more] - Load More

