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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 13 hours ago
Do you have a plan for the front cover? (Ignore this question if you’re swamped with thoughts for the illustrations XD)
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore
Story #7
Jenna
Jenna Handel pulled her fur-lined cloak closer about her as a cold wind blew. The country of Rand was well-known for its chilling winters, along with her sister country, Albandra.“Are you alright, Miss?” Ken, her body guard, asked.
“Yes, only slightly chilled, thank you.”…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 13 hours ago
My grandfather and his second wife hate Calvinism with a passion. I do not wish to go into any further details besides the entire thing in the past couple years paired with the death of someone very close to my heart caused a rift between God and I that I am still trying to fix.
If that means what I think it means, your grandmother was a very…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 13 hours ago
Oh, I should answer this question.
A little. Still leaves some room for questions.
What I am understanding is, you believe that Jesus told us to continue baptism and such, but matrimony is more of just a bonding with one another under God, rather than holding any sacramental value?
I’m going to quickly define two words…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 13 hours ago
What do you mean by that?
If I answered, I’d become the enemy of a lot of people.
First off, we do not worship Mary, and I do not believe there is any denomination that does for that matter! And building a statue or praying to her is not a form of worship at all! People build statues for many great people through out history, are…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
@hybridlore cool! you should, it’s awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 day, 13 hours ago
@linus-smallprint That’s a good idea; I’ve done the same, but the line is more in my mind than on the paper. I, personally, just imagine whether the creature would be balanced this way.
I’m pretty sure I’ve already posted this one here, but here it is again so I can break it down. Sniper is kinda in a bent pose and facing more towards us with…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 13 hours ago
Alrighty then! Thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
@ellette-giselle that’s…..exactly what I have an issue with. They’re all so good!!
I’d say if you have repeats, two that are supposed to depict the same scene, pick your favorite and leave the other one.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Ooof I’m bad at posing characters, so hugs are a thing I haven’t tried. Any tips?
Hmmm. Not sure really. I just sort of do it. lol.
Which illustrations are your fav? Any that you think I should chuck?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Also, the drawings are all amazing, I can’t choose which ones to axe and which to keep.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Um…. it’s called “Joseph was being stubborn and wouldn’t let me draw his hand and I was ripping a hole in the paper I erased it so many times, so then Amelia offered me a random piece of fabric, because she insisted I couldn’t make her skirt cover Joseph’s hand because it wouldn’t lay right. Which I agreed with)
LOLLLLL this…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
I NEED and Alec mood board because I just scrolled through that whole forum and there is none!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
btw, I NEED more Alec scenes!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Okay, first off, Alec is my favorite character.
Second, I LOVE THIS! This is so well done! I can totally see this going somewhere! You’ve really got talent.
One small thing, is Josiah the father? You said that Cole’s mother sat down next to Josiah. I was assuming it was their father, but maybe if you said something like, “His…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
I started reading them but I had to pause to help my sister with her hair. I’m about to finish up and then I’ll let you know. Sorry it’s taking me a minute!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
I’m glad I’m funny. When you use these quotes in your books be sure to credit me. *sniff of importance*
🤣🤣🤣
Yeah, I may toss it. Both of them actually.
I thought about a floor washing scene and/or playing scene. I’ll have to see. I did a few but didn’t like how they were turning out.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Do y’all have strong thoughts on either of the chapters?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
I just didn’t do them yet because I decided it was a hugging day.
Can I just say, that is a hilarious quote. 🤣
I don’t know if the one with Joseph hugging the girl is a major part of the story, so I would maybe hesitate on moving it onto the next stage. Not that every illustration needs to be an important scene, but I don’t k…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Thank you. Yeah, I like drawing emotional scenes, but I need to narrow down my picks. Like I said, this is round two of narrowing down. These are the ones that were allowed to get past the rough sketch stage.
For some reason, the faces in the one of Asher and Eric (whoever’s on the left, his mouth is too slanted, I think.) and the o…
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